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reference sheet of my ponysona, enjoy ;)
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I take time to correct to but I forget some mistake, that’s normal.
I’m currently on my phone as well (Thanks to my computer suddenly bluescreening when I went to respond to this.)and I simply take the time to correct everything.
And I don’t run T6 (Auto Correct.) Problem solved.
Also if I could I’ll correct my comments but we can’t.
oh no it’ not an excuse, I’m pretty good at English but because I’m french my phone auto-correct in french (so there are some mistakes).
I didn’t criticize it, I informed you that if I was a jerk/Douche, I would’ve targeted your spelling/grammar at this point. Nationality is little to no excuse, I, for example, is still in my teens, and I am Swedish on top of that.
For the grammar I can explain this with the fact that I’m french writing on a phone and most of the mistakes are because of the auto-correction of it (correcting in french when I write english).
One more example of something you’ve criticate without knowing.
If I was a jerk that criticized everything without knowing, I would’ve attacked your grammar long ago.
Same type of jacket not exactly the same as him. It’s à perfecto: à leather jacket punk are wearing. Now stop bains such à jerk and criticate everything without knowing.
So you’re copying yourself, whom’s wearing and identical jacket to Sid, thusly not copying Sid?
I’m not copying him, I’m copying myself. I’m, à punk and wearing the same outfit that i draw. So now you will think before to criticate without knowing. I show you sid vicious to show you that the outfit is not emo but punk.
So why are you trying to copy Sid, if that is to be the case?
Clean your eyes cause it’s the same thing
What you’ve drawn in the picture looks nothing like Sid’s jacket.
original compared to the weapons of other oc.
also i did not copy castlevania death scythe, I was inspired by it
sorry but here is the picture of sid vicious, lead singer of the sex pistol (number one group of punk rock and a reference of it)
(dont know how to add picture in comment)
http://www.motomag.com/IMG/jpg/sid_vicious.jpg
also i’ll dont tell you why he is imune to lightning but only can tell you that the fact that he is a vampire has an influence.
and to finish i have immagination and respect the show so i won’t make basic story where i’m a great powerfull pony who is the only one who can save the world, that would be useless and borring.
There’s a fine line between “Originality” and “Idiocy”. You clearly do not know that you tripped into the latter.
Since you yourself said that the scythe is from the Castlevania games, it can’t be ‘original’, since It’s a copied idea.
I once had an OC, a blind, blue pegasus.
No weapons.
Because he wasn’t some hero, he was a blind author.
“Cutie Mark: Well, for one, it’s a pathetic attempt at making Rainbow Dash’s lightning bolt one edgy. For two, no, they’re not THAT bloody detailed often. Simple colors and shapes and direct bloody meaning.” Rainbow Dash’s lightning bolt… hahahahahah! sory but i’v serched something who match the most with the tallent of my ponysona wich is… oh lightning manipulation so what’s better than a lightning to represent it and the black wind to show the way he use it (principaly increase speed and agility)
how many times do I say this armor protected as much as that of the night guard without helmet. (compare and you will see).
about th scythe coul you just stop it’s a weapon like other an more original than the thousand of Oc who have sword and katana for weapons.
loyal cause he is always here to help his friends but dark/evil because when he protected them he tends to get really mad and unstoppable and to finish he is shy only with mare and the pony he secretely love.
Your exact words were -“night armor…” look at other armor without helmet and tell me if it protect mor than mine.
Sure, just remove the helmet out of the picture I sent.
Punk^
Emo^.
“Player” is used for someone whom’s extremely socially active and more often than not seductive, picking up women (aka ‘playing’.)
Not sure if you mean ‘Gamer’ or ‘Gambler’. That’s more of a hobby.
Listen dude, I’m not going to read your self insert story about how you’re the greatest thing to ever happen to Equestria as you help banish the returning Nightmare Moon and marry Princess Luna. Either tell me how the fuck he does it, or don’t.
i tell to compare my armor with night guard armor without helmet.
for the eyes I admit that you’re right, but I do not draw from a long time and I still have progress to make
“Emo clothes? Check. Emo hair?”. sorry but there is a large difference between emo and punk.
vampire is a flaw for me cause it brings more negative points than good points
“So he eats lightning. Seems legit. Why is he immune to lightning though? Why can he harness it?” like i said i’m making a story about my ponysona and all of this question is aswered in it.
“player” as personality cause he like to play in his spare time
That first donut has more personality than your ‘OC’ from what I can gather off of the ‘story’.
Why?
It hut Luna in the face.
*Muzzle: Who cares what other people do? We’re dicussing your artwork, not theirs
*EQG: Because it’s EQG. Seriously. It’s like Hasbro-sponsored slashfic fanfiction. Including it isn’t edgy, it’s a bandwagon of the worst sense.
*Charged: It looks like drugs, for Christ’s sake. Either that or toothpaste.
*Cutie Mark: Well, for one, it’s a pathetic attempt at making Rainbow Dash’s lightning bolt one edgy. For two, no, they’re not THAT bloody detailed often. Simple colors and shapes and direct bloody meaning.
*Armor: Yours looks like something I’d see in a terrible superhero movie. It’s not show-accurate, and it’s not reality-accurate, nor is it protective. Just constricting ‘tacticool’ bollocks.
*Scythe: That’s not a bloody excuse. It looks like it’s trying to be edgy and ‘cool’ but fails every possible test. You might as well have a sword with dull edges and a whip at the end. It’s that useless.
The rest of your excuses rest on ‘He’s speshul’ rather than any concrete ground, and seem like a deliberate attempt at self-insert into canon while giving him alicorn-tier powers that are sound like they are copied off of random superpower generators.
In addition, how can he be Evil/Dark but loyal? Or evil and connected to Luna in any way, shape, or form? What about shy and a ‘player’? Those two don’t mix.
All in all, 2/10 for creative effort. Please learn about something called ‘originality’.
Let me break it apart, then.
I didn’t say your muzzle size is wrong I said that it looks extremely weird.
Compare it to…
Your EQG version is THE most clichéd wish-fulfillment shit I’ve seen in a long, long time. Red eyes? Check. Black skin/fur? Check. Emo clothes? Check. Emo hair? Check. Retarded looking weapon? Check. Although I’ll admit, the blade and blood on the blade looks really well-made.
“Vampire” Shouldn’t be a ‘flaw’ unless it ONLY brings negative effects. If it brings at least one positive effect, it’s considered a ‘trait’.
Here’s a pony with Electricity powers.
Her name and Cutie Mark is related to electricity in a non-gritty way.
Successful first step of creating an OC right there.
So he eats lightning. Seems legit. Why is he immune to lightning though? Why can he harness it?
Did I cover all of it? Let me know if I missed a point.
sorry but i still don’t see what you mean.