@ShadowSlut  
ok so i’ll explain everything:  
~~“stallion: muzzle too long” for the stallion?i’s my style of draw. (if you go on my DA, you will se a draw of kid discord who make longer muzzle and XenoKagamine who make same size as me).  
~~“colt: Eyes the size of an adult pony” sorry but i verify, and it’s the same size of colt in the show.  
~~“EQG: Hahahaha. No” what do you have against my EqG verson?  
~~“charged…” iff you look all my ref you’ll have noticed that it’s a lightning caps destroyed under his teeth.  
~~“cutie-mark…” where is ther too mutch details? it’s just a purple lightning between dark wind. (as simple as any cutie-mark in the show).  
~~“night armor…” look at other armor without helmet and tell me if it protect mor than mine.  
~~“scythe…” i am a great fan of death in castlevania so it’s because i like it and like death scythe it’s made out of bones  
~~“red eyes” like the red, always do red eye to character in game hen i can nothing else to say (exept that he is also a vampire).  
~~“name…” seriously? go see others Oc and thell me why they name are bether than mine. Windy Shade is the perfect description of my ponysona, he is as agile as the wind and as discreet as the shadow.  
~~“special power” my ponysona is not affected by lightning and guard it in him so he can use it to diverse things (he can control it but can’t create it).
 
Now about the story, it’s a short excerpt from the fanfic i’m making about him.  
Also if you carefully read the story, you will notice that he is not friend with Rainbow Dash and luna. Rainbow Dash is his idol and Luna the one who hired him.  
i think it answer everything. now if you still think my ponysona is “an angsty teen’s OC” then i can’t help you cause il will not change anything too him.

@8darkness8  

 
Look at the batpony tag and ask yourself what you did wrong.  
Because I can tell you what you did wrong, it’s just more advantageous for you to see it for yourself.

Windy Shade–the gassy vampire.

@ShadowSlut
 
Don’t forget the class lightning powers, excuse ‘story’ where - woe is he - the character is abandoned and then found by the Apples (seriously, look under ‘story’). Also apparently is best friends with Rainbow Dash and under Luna.
 
It’s an angsty teen’s OC, all right.
 
Also, the fuck is that font? Comic Sans - Cursive Edition?

@8darkness8  
And don’t even get me started on the Bio & Story.

@8darkness8  
Stallion: Muzzle too long, looks incredibly weird.  
Colt: Eyes the size of an adult pony.  
EQG: Hahahaha. No.  
Charged: He looks like he chewed through a power cable, brushed his teeth and got rabies.  
The Cutie Mark looks like nothing you’dd ever see in the show, too detailed.  
“Night Armor” is a complete rip-off, as it does nothing at all to protect him.  
Also, 1. Scythes are bad weapons, among the worse. 2. What the fuck is it made out of and why does he have it?  
Red eyes.  
Seriously, all that you need is a horn and you’ve the perfect self-insert wish-fulfillment for a depressed teenager.  
Also, the name. Hahahahaha.  
Special powers.  
Seriously, what the fuck am I looking at?

@Nuke  
sorry but why you asted this? (because of the outfit of my Oc on EqG version?)

@ShadowSlut  
…  
what’s wrong? can you explain?

…  
No.  
Everything is wrong.

I remember what it was like to be 12, and love Evanescence and Linkin Park.  
Or rather, I remember what it was like for other people to be 12, and love Evanescence and Linkin Park.  
I have to handle this with thick, padded gloves.

@StarrySkies  
I did not understand what you wanted to say in your comment so :/

@8darkness8  
I was more than well aware of this.

@StarrySkies  
i tagged “equestria girl” because there is an EgG version of my Oc in it.

Eh looks like a normal Bat pony OC to m-  
Is that an EQG version?  
……