@BigMax  
Thanks again! hopefully i can improve quickly. :)

@Ponysubmarine  
Well… I can see the problem, maybe.  
These look like… sketches, proofs of concept, warming-up art and so on. And as such, they’re… just fine, really. There’s nothing much to say, so they are a good start.
 
Try to make something more elaborate, more refined. Create a scene. Make an attempt at digital art.  
Or, if you don’t feel comfortable with it for now, have a look at two of the most interesting and inspiring pencil artists: Joey Darkmeat and DfectiveDvice.  
For more sketchy art, I’d suggest Lolover.
 
And yes, I’ve read your 4koma. Very nice. The reasons for its low amount of views (and no comments so far) are mainly:  

@BigMax  
Thanks for the encouragement! Its discouraging however to know that I am not getting enough views. I want to see people react and offer advice on how else I can improve though. I guess a start is better then not :) Thanks again!

@Ponysubmarine  
Well, these are cute.  
There’s never enough of cute things.  
So keep it up.

@Hippodrome  
Thank you! Its the first time I have ever uploaded what I have drawn. A new world is opening up to me. :)

Cute, and right in my strike zone.
 
Keep it up.

@BigMax  
Oh okay, thanks! :)

@Ponysubmarine  
Ok, done. Next time you can add it on your own.
 
Keep in mind that Derpibooru can upload directly from a DeviantArt page. This way, the source and the artist tag is automatically compiled.  
But since the artist tag here doesn’t coincide with you DA’s name, you have to fix it manually every time you use Grab from URL or ask to alias it on this thread forum.

@BigMax  
Ill stick with Ponysubmarine for derpibooru.

@Ponysubmarine  
So, you should choose one. You’re here as “Ponysubmarine”, but on DA you’re “Pengiunsubmarine”… which one do you prefer?

@BigMax  
Sure. :)

Hey, it’s time to create an artist tag for you, don’t you think OP?