I respect the effort he’s making, but… this is just… kind of terrible. Awkward art, weak writing - weak dialogue specifically, nothing that’s being said sounds like things people would say out loud - poor designs for the original characters that just SCREAM “original character!”…
This is the sort of comic you make and keep in a desk drawer (or a documents folder) and never show to anybody. You rewrite it years from now when your art and writing skills have improved.
It’s a lot easier to read if you pretend it’s like Half Life: Full Life Consequences.
This is the sort of comic you make and keep in a desk drawer (or a documents folder) and never show to anybody. You rewrite it years from now when your art and writing skills have improved.