@d715  
The something.

@Background Pony  
Like stock positive comments are any better
 
at least i try
 
or something

@d715  
As an experience asshole (the biggest on the booru, a title I flaunt all the time after Smiling and the mods gave it to me), I can firmly say you have gone beyond asshole and all your comments are as useful to her improvement as this comment is for you to stop being such an annoying git about this story.

@InkRose98  
Maybe if she said something sooner i would have stopped.
 
Yeah i know i can be an massive asshole at times but i do want her to improve her writing skills and speed of uploads like i said the pace of updates is far too slow and makes something that should feel quick drag on.
 
But again i never heard anything back so i had to repeat myself
 
hey if i didn’t care i wouldn’t have been doing this
 
and meh im on guy she’ll be fine

@d715  
@d715  
You do know you’ve been constantly verbally abusing the work of a 15 year old girl, right? I’ve seen your comments on her previous works, and you have been very rude, disrespectful, and derogatory towards her. What you’re doing is not “constructive criticism,” but is instead plain old hating and bashing.  
I hope you’re happy, crushing her like that. You seem to be obsessed with hating on her.

@Princess♠Molestia  
Well the thing is ink here seems to believe chrysalis is a tactical genus
 
like if celestia does make her cliche hope speech that would just raise the ponies love levels and changelings can just force the love out.
 
So yeah this is the title characters big moment being a sucker

@Princess♠Molestia  
And there food problems could be solved simply like this.
 
Chrysalis: Can we have some love?
 
Celestia: Sure.
 
Conflict over. :P

@Evowizard25  
I like to imagine that’s how Chrysalis does things.
 
Chrysalis: I don’t need generals! I am a master tactician!
 
Changeling #44324: And the populace wonders why we’re low on food…

@Princess♠Molestia  
I’m surprised nobody noticed them ramming their heads into the shield. Didn’t anyone look up into the sky? Is it taboo to do so on a wedding day.
 
“Don’t look up at the sky, or you’ll be banished.”
 
And how did she hide them?…..That’s the last thing that went through my mind. Chrysalis’s plan was just so nonsensical that I doubt even she knew where it was going. {It looked like she was making it up as she went along.}

@Evowizard25  
Exactly. I’m still confused how having a whole country ready to put your head on a pike in vengeance and having just one city’s worth of changelings to fight back gives her power. The city’s worth comes from the size of the swarm we saw in the episode (how the heck did she hide that anyway?)

@Princess♠Molestia  
Yeah, I’m just now realizing this. Chrysalis is openly taking over. She’s the new head of state.
 
This is going to create immediate retaliation and uprisings.

@Hadschott
 
My biggest complaint is more of the fact that all Luna has to do to win is well…nothing.
 
All she would have to do it keep the sun/moon up for like a week until Chrysalis gave in to heat/ frost and surrendered. That and thinking having an angry public gives power over them
 
Still, not a bad story though.

My biggest problem with the story is that the hole change a Pony (an Immortal one…you know how that in its different ver. works right?) into a changeling thing, which is way to fast and also dumb in its core. Has anyone here an idea how Biology works? And don´t say Magic because magic also follows the laws of Nature/Physics …

@Background Pony  
yeah I know, its called changed my mind based on how the story has unfolded that’s how bad this has gotten.
 
This really should have been Celestia dealing with being a changeling not some cliche ridden fight equastria. You know this is going to be a dumb speech

Well, we’re f*cked.

@Princess♠Molestia
 
The kidnapping bit is true, but changelings don’t turn into the children; they just take their form. Changelings are genderless, blank-slate daemons that an incubus leaves behind in place of a newborn child (if the mother doesn’t attend to it well).
 
The human child is then raised as a daemonic concubine, and the changeling is raised as a human. It slowly feeds on the emotions and bodily fluids (milk, urine, whatever) of its family, until they’re so corrupt that life is meaningless to them. The souls of the family can then be harvested.
 
For those asking where I know these things from, I’ve done a lot of philosophical study, and a big part of that has been old ritual and superstitious things. The diversity of pagan mythos, the occult, stuff like that. Really fascinating if you’ve got the time for it.

@d715  
I’m sorry, but were you not the one asking for more Celestia and bashing the artist for putting “too much of Luna” in the comic? How hypocritical.

@d715  
added
 
Yeah so anyway is it just me or are these Celestia part boring? They feel like filler, and don’t seem to really impact the story, I would rather find out what happen to Cadence or the Mane Six, hell Luna is better, like what’s she doing?

@Salamenace  
Yeah the here’s the problem
 
1 her dumb speech will be cut off the second she tries if chrysalis has a brain
 
2 if it works so? channeling feed on love. Hope and joy are primarily emotions of love. They feed anyway
 
3 luna fans will bitch endless if luna doesn’t save the day

@d715  
Stealing the power of the sun didn’t go as planned. So, not everything is flawless for her.  
Thing is Inkrose loves Celestia, so she’s not going to have her wallow around doing jack. Heck, the last panel shows she’s not broken and will still want to fight.

@Princess♠Molestia
 
 
That’s what bugs me so much Celestia isn’t going to do anything its luna who’s going to save the day like the writer really wants the luna fans and threw to main character in the gutter

@Evowizard25  
And yet so far all her plans have worked without a problem
 
She’s only going to loss because the plot says so
 
also incoming cliche speech that isn’t stopped for someone reason in 3…2…

@Princess♠Molestia  
Ugh, I do not need Scootaling Reminders, I have that shit blocked for a reason

….Chrysalis’s plan is so flawed I’m not even going to say anything. {It’s fitting really. The episode makes it out as if she’s a terrible planner.}

@Background Pony  
That’s why that show irritates me to know end. {Especially what they did to dragons and Odin. Freakin’ Odin.}