@MLP-Silver-Quill
 
Thanks!
 
Heh, eye… get it? Because of the stars… in her.. ok, I’ll shut up.

@Background Pony  
Good eye!

@MLP-Silver-Quill
 
I see the stars in rarity’s eyes are gone.

@barbeque  
Plus, this features one tiny difference from the original post.
 
Props if you can spot the change.

Look, a distraction!

@KrautalicornSS  
What an original way to say “FIRST”.

@igotnopicks  
this is higher res

Dupe

this is the first time i fave a picture when no one else have, plus is this part before or after

Welp, there go Twilight’s friends already taking advantage of her status as a Princess. Will they ever learn?

I think this is interesting, love the art and want to read more..=)

@Cerebrate19  
I’m going to spoil this much: she will still be an alicorn princess.
 
I’m still not sure if alicorn Twilight was a good decision, but now that it’s been made I think it would be a mistake to go backwards. Otherwise, the whole event really was just a toy sale gimmick and wastes potential.

making a prophecy right here: at the end of this Comic twilight won´t be an alicorn princess.

Countdown until Twilight is making out with the OC

@MLP-Silver-Quill  
Sorry, Mathprofbrony*.

@PwnyPony @wantfastcars @mathprofbrony
 
Ah, that’s too bad about the stars. I got that idea from Pinkie Pie in The Ticket Master. But what works for Pinkie doesn’t necessarily work for Rarity.
 
Unfortunately, I can’t change this post since I’m not the uploader (can you even do that on this site?). If you head on over to the Deviantart Page, there’s an updated image with a hopefully improved face.
 
As to the jaw hinge, I’m afraid that proper biology is going to have to bow to cartoon physics on this one. Mathpony’s observation makes sense, but I too have seen this in the show so I don’t consider it out of place.
 
Thanks to all of you for your feedback.

Ponies smiling with the corners upturned like that always feel a little weird to me. It seems like the jaw hinged right under her nose. But then, you get that in the show too. (I’m no expert, bear that in mind.)
 
Also, as no one has commented on it and I think it deserves it, that’s a good plot for this story. I could see this being an episode (in which of course the rest of the Mane Six realize that they’re being selfish by the end of the ep).

@wantfastcars  
I agree, I just couldn’t word it right

If I had to say something about the mouth, I’d say it’s too narrow. It just seems that way to me.

@MLP-Silver-Quill  
hmmm well one thing, remove the stars, the eyes would be fine without them, it is what makes them creepy, the mouth isn’t nearly as bad, it is still kinda creepy but I don’t know how I would fix it

@MLP-Silver-Quill  
The mouth is what throws it off lips going below the lines which make her head feels off.

@FlutterLove  
Well, lemme know if you decide. I can’t make it better if people don’t give feedback.

@PwnyPony  
You mean…
 
DAT FAIC

@MLP-Silver-Quill  
I can’t decide what part is creepier DX

@FlutterLove  
What’s the creepiest aspect? The eyes? The shape of the mouth?