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ATTENTION PLEASE
Yeah, even though I’m not much of a writer, I got to at least learn the basics as well as the common sense of it. You can make a good story with an “ask character” tumblr series (there are many examples on this site) Just introducing things out of nowhere doesn’t help. It would have worked better if this whole “battle” was separate to the “ask” series. Using it to interrupt the main objective of the ask series kind of muddles it up imo.
Welp, so Pipp is right in this situation
She said she was downtown
True.
Again not trying to be mean, but I think for the future you should really try abd think forward and pace things better instead of just brining in new stuff at random or skipping ahead of story stuff
Good point.
No offence but an arc just starting out of the blue woth not even a little bit of build up doesn’t really do a lot of good story wise
To be honest, I didn’t want this arc to have buildup. It was supposed to happen out of nowhere.
The most chaotic plot twist of the century!!!
It literally started with this. It began right after a question was answered. No build up whatsoever
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Factory dash shot her and all the fighting n stress killed the baby,, seems like enough build up to me
Me neither. All of this appeared out of nowhere with no buildup.
Refer to this panel.
And this one, before that.