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Patch notes: Buffed Abels stripes so he would look more zebra-y. Authors Note: Some peeps said they didn’t realize Abel was a zeeb until it was mentioned in Dialogue. So he now has more and THICCer stripes.

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Anon-a-Miss
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).

Can’t stop laughing at the absurdity of what happened in this page. Mare see’s Able, Able is barely able to say “Hi”, mare goes into an angry rant about exploiting Zebras and is so “triggered” that she immediately moves out. And nothing of value was lost.
Considering her “charming” personality this makes one wonder how long she and Alice have been roommates. My guess is about an hour. XD
CASketches

Loveable Lap Bat
@tenenbris that’s fine. i do like the style you’re using and just trying to offer that difficult mix of support with constructive criticism.
Tenenbris
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not using this anymore
@CASketches  
The issue is I’m drawing very differently in this comic, so things don’t always turn out quite how I imagined them to be. It will get better with time.
CASketches

Loveable Lap Bat
I suppose no nude jokes are necessary at this point, with the missing pants. They are horses after all. With magically disappearing genitals.
 
Jokes aside, I’m enjoying this story
 
As for feedback, not much besides what I said already. Though, i do miss those glorious thicc thighs you drew Patricia with recently. I’d keep rolling on that if you can for those few bits you draw whole bodies. These ones look just a touch awkward in comparison.
CASketches

Loveable Lap Bat
I feel like i’m missing a page, vs the previous one with the transition to a random entrance but still, funny.  
also I do like the buffed stripz for the zeeb for clarity. keep it up!
Background Pony #12E1
And now we learn Abel belongs firmly in the donald duck style of dresscodes.