@leash  
Drawing on a tablet is much easier than using a mouse. It would provide a more natural feel in drawing resulting in better and more confident lining and etc.
 
But yes, it also falls down to the software and skill level.

Uhhh guys why are you talking about drawing tablets? There’s a lot of people on deviantart who use mouse. It’s all about the software and line smoothing tools
 
I agree anatomy is whack. the pony’s arm joint should be lower and the elbow needs to be more pronounced

@Ponies from the underground  
I think it’s free, but hey, you have future bro, I believe on you.

@Deprê_YT  
Thanks for sticking up for me dude. Also I do plan on working with SFM one day however I don’t really have a steam account right now and I’m not sure if it’s free either.

@Background Pony #60A3  
The only things I noticed in your comment were slight “swearing” at the artist, you have no argument at all in your comment, just hate involved, if you have no good argument about it, just do not comment.
 
What I want to say is that if you say bad things about someone else’s art, at least tell them what he can do better, he’s trying to do it, so I think you’d better stop talking shit about others, okay?

@Background Pony #60A3  
I just need to say… “Fuck you bro”.

@Background Pony #1DB0  
>:C

@Deprê_YT  
lol

@Ponies from the underground  
Welp, it’s so many good ideas about getting easy money, but ya know? Games are just fiction, not EVERY game.

@Deprê_YT  
But I can gta but it’s a game so only the characters in the game get to keep the money. Or what about the Zelda series where you can literally just cut grass and then money comes out. Or how abou the Mario series where there’s free money everywhere.

It’s a good attempt, and as the other user said, there is room for improvement and I believe you can do it.  
There are some affordable graphic tablets out there. I would suggest to try a relatively cheap screenless one.  
I’m currently using a Huion tablet and it does it’s job well.
 
I would also suggest practicing some more in anatomy. It’s good but it does look a little broken. With some practice you’ll improve really quickly. I look forward to see future works dude.

@Background Pony #1DB0  
Don’t laugh at me!

@Ponies from the underground  
Yeah, it is that thing, I just can’t remember the name, and yes, it’s really expensive, but you can just rob a bank and TADAA, you got it! I’m joking, don’t do it.

@Deprê_YT  
lol

@Deprê_YT  
I think I know what you’re talking about but I can’t remember what they’re called either plus the thing about a different art program or device is that sometimes they can be way to expensive and I haven’t even graduated from school yet so it’s hard for me to make money at the moment.

@Background Pony #1DB0  
Dont’ laugh at him, at least he tried.

lol

It isn’t bad, but you can really get better. Why don’t ya buy one of these uh… What’s the name? It’s something that you can draw with a digital pen.