Fanfic Writing General

@Background Pony #DEA3
VSE about Texting While Driving.

setting live action sitcom general setting prolly in the early uhh.. 00s.

Starts with main character and his friends in a car, his Cool Kid Best Fiend (like Shawn to Cory) is driving.
they are pulled over by a cop who tickets the friend for texting, and the friend is further punished by his parents when the kids get back home. Part of said additional punishment is his parents take his phone, which he feels is pure evil and steals it back. He then starts texting the group and some of his other friends about it. When the texts become more and more ranting most of the group feel uneasy and drop out of the ‘chat’. It ends with the main charater still there but texting only a little and the Friend mosty texting another friend of his… who is revealed to be behind the wheel himself. Ends with the two rapidly texting back and forth.. until the crash and the fade to white.

fade back in to the next day. The friends friend in the car survided the wreck. The girl in the passenger seat did not, nor did some of the family of 5 whom he T boned. Semi montage of the arrest and parts of the trail and lawsuits. The BF who was texting the driver is also hit with charges and sued.

What do you think of this idea?

I want to create a land beyond Equestria that was founded by ponies and one other creature race, which is different in terms of technology and magic.

As time progresses, by the 21st century, the magic in this land becomes unique and is unknown even to the most powerful unicorns in Equestria. This magic cannot be taken away, regardless of whether a unicorn can still use its normal magic, and it can also be accessed by Earth and pegasus ponies.

Most importantly, this magic is primarily used to power technology that appears even more advanced than what
we have in the 21st century.

For example, hoverbikes or carriages can hover slightly above the ground, but they are only used during weather conditions like rain or snow. They are still pony-driven, as they always have been.

I just want to express it because I don’t want to fall into the “bad idea” too much tech not enough magic idea, also I had this way before mlp gen 5 but I still want to add this to my AU one day

@Mr100dragon100
What other species? Dragons? Yaks? Humans? Zebras or Kirin? Though I consider the latter two (as well as abadas and kelpies) pony-adjacent.

I want to be more original with my fanfiction. One of my ideas features a creature inspired by the Creature from the Black Lagoon. I’m also considering incorporating mummies, werewolves, vampires, and possibly spirits.

Additionally, I’ve been thinking about including Gen 1 races as spirits from another realm. I might also add dragons that haven’t been mentioned in the show, such as those that have wings and feathers but no legs or arms.

I considered adding European bison, but I want to avoid too much tension due to the history of vampires and others.

Idk this is something I should wait till I actully get to the point where the land will be founded.

I cannot include anything already mentioned in the show or comics, as it might break continuity. Even though I disregard the comics, I do not include them for the same reason.