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I would like to get constructive critic about my art so I can try to get better. Your kind if you give me some.
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Certainly the first time i’ve seen, outside of MIB.
Men in Black (the movie).
Thanks for the feedback.^^
Seems I was careless and should have done a head/body propotion check just to be sure.
As for the sharp edges and slightly uncanny twilight: both are on purpose
As for the art:
It seems to a bit too many sharp edges compared to the show (it can pass as “style”.
The anatomy is fine for the most part but the ponies in panels 1, 2 and 3 seem to be a bit too… short making them look more like fillies then mares.
Also Twilights face in the last panel hits the uncanny valley for me.
Unicorns. Always. Cheat.
How did that “h” get in there… =I
Really cool art, bro.
Only the teeniest tiniest spelling mistakes, but nothing anyone would go all “Grammar Nazi” over.
Oh, and I would totally go out of my way to search for more of your stuff on Derpibooru.