As far as I’ve seen this isn’t too bad at all. Theres something about the manes I still find jarring. I think a less realistic mane would work better for the style but definitely the best models I’ve seen with fur so far. Good work!

@Background Pony #7F4F  
Yes ive been told thank you for your input c:

well this is weird

@Foxidro  

 
My pleasure. I only discovered this because somebody added the “adoracreepy” tag to some of my art pieces (which is something I’m trying to accomplish on purpose), and I wanted to take a look at who else was doing it, but from the conversation, it looked like you were trying to avoid it.

@Chopsticks  
Thanks for the developed reply my dude, im gonna get your insight in the creepyness and try to work it out thank ya ^^ the plastic mouth thing is probably too much roughness and nothing to reflect from cuz its a empty scene

The work is still very good and promising, and I’m surprised it doesn’t have more upvotes (not doing well-known characters doesn’t help, if it were Princess Luna I’m sure it might have hundreds of upvotes). I saved it because there’s elements that I use in my own art in this that I can actually study.
 
 
For the creep factor, 60% of it could be the dry, plastic look of the mouth, but more likely it’s the shape of it. On a cute[r] pony, the mouth and cheeks are very close to skull, with less emphasis on snout.
 
We often view large noses and elongated mouths as more unsettling due to predatory nature; and with primates as our competitors, the rounded snout on a large mouth doesn’t usually help.
 
But 40% of it are the eyes. Cover the mouth and you’ll still see it. When the eyes are wide and very center, it adds an overwhelming amount of straight-forward focus, which we interpret as creepy.
 
When the eyes are looking ‘up’ through the top of the eyelids, we get a sense of smallness as the character’s large eyes look upward to compensate the perspective of our height. And when they look down, it’s a shy, embarrassed sort of feel.
 
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Drawing this, the cute aspects of the original grew on me but trying to demonstrate…
 

This looks really adorable in my opinion. Great work so far

@BigBuggyBastage  
thanks man, i love mawshots and i would actually be doing most of my stuff fetish and porn related but for now i basically have no privacy to do what i want, but the focus is really him, not the mouth tho yes the maw is gud i think the problem is more in the hair and fur tho, i used a pretty realistic material, i guess idk at this point im really confused xd and most drawings of tsitra360 their mouths are pretty big so that was one of the reasons cuz i got references from his painting, i literally did this in 8hrs i didnt thought it would come out so realistic and creepy for most people i still find him cute af

@Foxidro  
This is a No Kink-Shaming Zone, you’re fine there. :)
 
But if you’re going to go that route, I’d suggest making the fetish the focus. As a BgP said, you’ve inadvertently made the rest of it “too good.” I know, it’s faint if damning praise, but the high quality distracts from that which the viewer is supposed to be focusing.
 
To show you a few examples of what I mean, below are some images with the mawshot tag, all ranking pretty highly. Note how prominently the mouth is shown, darn close to dead-center, in each.
 
WARNING: I’ve spoilered these, because some are NOT SAFE, so don’t say I didn’t warn you.
 

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You’ve got excellent skills, I think, so don’t let any of us here in the peanut gallery stop you. Find that happy middle-ground of detail. Keep trying, keep drawing, always be experimenting, and you will succeed.

can i take him home?

@BlueStream
 
@BigBuggyBastage  
Fuck, why i have to like such a shitty fetish, i tried to add some detail cuz my other one was the lack of detail that made it look like a plushie

@celestiatroll  
damn that is much creepier ;~;

@Foxidro  
Nu it’s not very creepy (i think the mouth is to blame xD), he’s very cute~  
and i really like the quality of your render :D

I think it’s the jaw shape, it looks like he has an underbite  
Perhaps this looks less creepy to some?
 

There’s so much effort clearly put into this that it slips past average work into uncanny valley territory.

@Foxidro  
I think the combination wide-open mouth and grin are what’s off-putting. Like he’s gonna eat me or something.
 
I do like the hair and coat, though.

Fucc i do something thats not realistic and it looks like a plushie then when i do something more realistic its creepy wth xdd im so confused its just me that found it cute asf?

This is what i see in my nightmares.
 
That hair looks suuper realistic, like human hair.

Love the hair, so fuzzy

This looks super super cool, great job!!

@Snicky  
its alright i guess xd i was just trying different styles and found it cute but its apparently so real thats horrifying XD

Got to love all the positive feedback you get whenever you post 3D art. I feel you man.

@Axel_Changeling  
thank you OwO

@Background Pony #220F  
horrifyingly hot

Holy fuck this is horrifying