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@Background Pony #333B  
That’s true, the writer actually is a native speaker though (as far as I know). I’m trying my best to find issues in the writing but I admit I’m a bit blind for this stuff. Perhaps cause I know the script for the next pages and extra info…
 
@Background Pony #2954  
@Background Pony #996E  
Is it there a problem in this scene (pages 41-43) that I miss or did this page appear to you like a single page comic?
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@Background Pony #996E  
I’m just not sure how to read this honestly. No matter what way I read this it seems like there is a lot of context missing. It would probably be more obvious if I looked back at some of the other pages, but off hand it seems like they’re skipping whole parts of the conversation.