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Except this is not a retail comic
I have to disagree. The pace was deliberate and timed to show the desperation that Spike was feeling. I can’t but help that it fits well for this kind of story.
If you feel that the pacing was off, what would you have cut to make it work? What story elements would you have rejected?
Of course it has pacing problems, have you seen how shot Spike’s legs are?
Beat me to it. xDDD