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Emerald attempts to make animal noises to fool the two undead.
“The heck is that…? A squirrel?” One of the undead asks.
“Of course not. Can’t you sense how big it is? It’s a pony. I think anyway.” The other undead.
Emerald throws caution to the wind and stands up, casting his push spell to knock the undead away.
They fall to the ground and Emerald runs to the clearing, hoping to find something to help him escape the forces that are after him.
however as he runs his vision starts to go spotty and fade away, and the last thing he sees is himself tumbling to the ground as two withered looking ponies and a giant, skeleton like creature approach…
“The heck is that…? A squirrel?” One of the undead asks.
“Of course not. Can’t you sense how big it is? It’s a pony. I think anyway.” The other undead.
Emerald throws caution to the wind and stands up, casting his push spell to knock the undead away.
They fall to the ground and Emerald runs to the clearing, hoping to find something to help him escape the forces that are after him.
however as he runs his vision starts to go spotty and fade away, and the last thing he sees is himself tumbling to the ground as two withered looking ponies and a giant, skeleton like creature approach…
Emerald wakes up. He groggily tries to get to his hooves, but he notices they are all connected to chains. He appears to be trapped to a wall.
“Ah, you are awake.” something says.
Emerald looks around, and sees a robed creature wearing a horned mask. His robe is badly tattered, and Emerald can see the dessicated look on his front legs. His front legs also seem to hold gauntlets with weird attachements coming off the end of them, one of them clawed.
“Now. Tell me what you are doing here, intruder.” The masked pony says.
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>>1138869
I guess we’ll have to wait and see what happens.
FicFic occasionally does Q&A’s with the players. When he does that you can complain to him about how you feel. He does listen to his players.
that is unfair and just bad writing overall. this character presented is an ignoramus just so it risks emerald being murdered. its half assed.
like i siad, it is transparent he wanted to put him in this situation and made sure he ended up in this situation.
i mean the character portrayed in the story. somehow anti magic allows dsiguises, not realizing that someone would think a town that looks obviously abandoned would make someone thing its abandoned.
andi t may very well be he decided to just kill off emerald now for the drama of it. i have seen pony based cyoa and they have a tendency to do just that.
I occasionally write some colt quest things like non canon endings and short fics. But not the actual cyoa.
@Background Pony #5ECA
I think I would suggest to keep calm and wait to see what happens. FicFic has run the cyoa so far quite well. It would be best to not disrespect him too much.
hell everyone on that board is pointing out the paradox there. and shows how stupid this guy really is.
think i saw you mention somehting about writing. shrugs.
either way, this is transparent. this is a 100% forced situation. Hell its so bad that somehow this guy does not understand that having anti magic properties to him would make him unable to create a dsiguise to BEGIN with.
also if they killed the kraken they would have arrived on the island as well. would have to because of the damages. and they would probably be looking for emerald. and notice the town.
Uh… I’m not Ficfic anon. FicFic is the one who draws and writes the cyoa.
bullshit dude. you transparently set it up so he ends up here nomatter what. its damn obvious you did.
why i hate this so called ‘chose your adventure’ things. they always pull somethign contrived on you. every time.
Oh okay. I hope you have a good day tomorrow then.
I just got on to see what the anons are doing, but they seem to care more about that Celestia bush edit at the moment… Also, I can’t stay up for long because I have to be up by 6AM tomorrow.
So was I. Hopefully we can still win this. Are you on the thread? You might be able to help us.
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