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Background Pony #5BBF
@Rinmiyuki  
i would have to disagree. we are talking about someone who has lived for a thousand years and fought monstrous enemies time an again. considering how just blatantly evil this thing is, she should have been able to see it for what it was. even chrysalis had to come in at a time when celestia’s attention was divided to begin with.  
also she could simply look at the two and realize that fluttershy is completely unharmed yet pinkie is. kinda put two and two together there.
 
regardless, i do not agree with the vitrol, but i do think this is not a good story at all. it is so very contrived in far too many ways. it is not as bad as that complete idiocy that was that other story, where somehow pinkie murders celestia who is a demigod and could have incinerated pinkie where she stood, but it is not a well told tale.
 
even if it was, it relies far too much on blatant gore. it is just badly told, badly executed, and just bad.
Tszeb
Non-Fungible Trixie -
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Ah, grimderp at it’s finest, I laughin my ass off on this XD
 
Seriously, if one make a universe this grimdark, it just comes off hilarious :)
Rinmiyuki

@Background Pony #A8DF  
umm maybe you should just ignore this comic then? No one is forcing you to read it.
 
From what I’ve seen Celestia was sent a letter detailing Twilight’s thoughts that Pinkie was killing her friends. So, when Twilight found out that it was a spirit that was possessing Fluttershy There was no time to relay this information to Celestia.
 
So Celestia still thinks Pinkie is responsible.
Background Pony #4C62
………… bullllshiiiiiiiiit!
 
why is it that people think the only way to tell a story is to make a character a total retard.
 
and more asspull ago!
 
i am sorry whoever is making this, but this story is garbage. you cannot write. you have to rely on the FUCKING DEMIGOD being a total idiot for this garbage story to function.  
stop writing it! take it down and think things out and come back when you can create something better. cause i have a feeling you can but waste that ability on this trash.