I remember there being song lyrics in the original DeviantArt post for this (which has since been deleted) if anyone has any idea what they were it would be really nice if you could say what you think they might be from

this tag must be labled grimdark

@DasHiveMind  
Read the rest of it.  
Very good so far, but it’s a little hard to see where it’s going, aside from the chaos gods are going to totally ruin Equestria.
 
I guess that rule of internet awesomeness means my own fanfic probably will get finished?  
I know exactly how it’s going to go, but I keep tweaking things every time I re-read it.  
Take the fight between the Warhound and Twilight for example.  
When this was first written, it consisted of a sum total of 10 lines.  
The meeting with Celestia in chapter 2 was half as long as it is now.
 
I’m not sure how I could bulk out the first part. I usually see adding lots of descriptions as ‘waffling’. It gets on my nerves a bit when there’s reams of descriptions and the story seems to drag.
 
That said, I really wanted to improve the socializing scene in chapter 6.  
And chapter 7 is probably either going to be huge, or I’ll split it in two, because Rarity’s actions there draw out the rest of the chaos force. The cultists do a runner rather than face the marine’s retribution, and I intend to have 2-3 of the loyalist characters get killed off in the retreat back to the portal.

Pinkie,
 
Not an orc.

@40kponyguy  
Unfortunatly, it’ follows the rules of internet awesomeness.
 
The chance of a work being completed is directly inverse to how good the quality of it is.

@DasHiveMind  
Okay, read the first part.
 
Must admit, the banter between the chaos gods was amusing.
 
Could be interesting to see where this goes.  
If it ever gets continued that is.

@DasHiveMind  
Thanks, I’ll have a look later on.
 
Last updated march 2013?  
Methinks this may be a bit dead.
 
Like the 2 god-tier fanfics ‘Ork in equestria’ by Mago5, and ‘Courage, Honor and Friendship’ by Verbose Sobriquet.

@40kponyguy  
tada
 
It’s…pretty old and still incomplete.

@Kharn The Generally Swell Guy  
Flat ones.
 
 
@DasHiveMind  
Could be worth a look.  
Got a link for the other fanfic as it stands?

@40kponyguy  
Oh wow I feel like a idiot now.
 
You see, there’ is another guy out there who is doing pictures of the mane cast chaos style, by specific gods. It’s also that “show accurate” style like your art work is too.
 
The guy who made those pics is also doing a fanfic about the mane cast well…being corrupted by chaos.
 
I somehow got mixed up between the two because very similar concept….which I shouldn’t have as I use one of the other dudes pic as a avatar on a site I go on….

…I actually can’t tell what kind of skulls those are.

@40kponyguy  
Don’t know what happened there.
 
If you mean my own fanfic, then yes. It’s up on Fimfiction, but isn’t doing well at all.  
I guess my writing skills are even rustier than my drawing skills.
 
Link for the fanfic here:-  
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/208441/the-mission
 
I’ll try to keep on with this. So many downvotes has put me off a bit, but only 8 readers voted, (1 up, 7 down). It’s been viewed nearer 50 times, so a lot are holding back judging it until I get nearer finished.  
Every time I check it over I find something I want to alter.
 
Also, I could well be dropping a pic of my next addition for the pony marine army shortly.  
And it’s a Forgeworld model.

@DasHiveMind  
If you

Does this mean the fanfic is back on?

@40kponyguy  
Well, that didn’t work.  
Haven’t worked out how to do links here yet.  
Try the tag ‘artist:swinbop’

@40kponyguy  
lol, oh Pinkie

@40kponyguy  
Yeah, it has.  
Here
 
>>#259074

@Ashdreg  
I have one of Pinkie Pie as well.  
I’ll just check if it has been uploaded.

@40kponyguy  
That’s Rarity  

I still think her alter ego would be better suited to this role.  
Still, fresh artwork is fresh artwork.
 
What next? Molestia as a steed of slaanesh?

I was very surprised this was not on derpibooru when I looked at ahrimatt’s stuff, even on his pre-named account.