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Just a quick little doodle of Spike, perspective got kind of wonky and I couldn’t decide what to do with his feet…

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PaskaNaakka
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All right, here goes.
 
  1. His neck is too thick. It needs to be much thinner. Also pay attention to how the lines curve from his head to his body (do a side by side comparison with a still from the show, it might help you see them better).
     
  2. Spike is bit of an egghead here, his head should be more round. It also seems to be too small in comparison to his body. However, it seems that you got the facial proportions down pretty well. Make his head bigger, leave his nose, mouth and eye as they are.
     
  3. His leg is coming out of his ass right now. When looking at him from the side, it should begin where the leg that’s in the front begins. The leg size in comparison to the body is pretty good though. Just the placement is a bit off.
     
  4. His tail should be longer and thicker.
     
    Those are the major things i noticed. Sorry i couldn’t make a drawing to illustrate my points, i’m not very good at explaining things. :P
PaskaNaakka
Nightmare in the Moon - Had their OC in the 2024 Derpibooru Collab.
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
Roseluck - Had their OC in the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!
A Lovely Nightmare Night - Celebrated the 12th anniversary of MLP:FIM!
Princess of Love - Extra special version for those who participated in the Canterlot Wedding 10th anniversary event by contributing art.
Elements of Harmony - Had an OC in the 2022 Community Collab
Non-Fungible Trixie -
Magnificence - Artist with 100+ Safe/Suggestive images with over 100 upvotes, and 5+ Questionable/Explicit images with over 350 upvotes
Twinkling Balloon - Took part in the 2021 community collab.

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Hey, a decent start. I’ll send some guidelines your way in a few. Just have to find my pencils.
 
Speaking of which, what kind of pencil do you use? You might want to use a softer one, their line is easier to erase.