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Me: What’s that? Do you see that tornado that suck me in and I was landed on Princess Luna’s head?
 
Shining: Yes, and we have reason to believe that it was one of Queen Chrysalis’–
 
(Suddenly, in a puff of smoke, Queen Chrysalis appears)
 
Queen Chrysalis: You rang?
 
Me: (gasps with horror as I back away from Queen Chrysalis and holding my cat, Toto in my arms)
 
Celestia: You! I thought I told you never to set foot in Equestria again!
 
Me: (look at Celestia) What happened?
 
Celestia: Do you want “right now” or “before”?
 
Me: Yes. From long time ago you mentioned about Equestia she got in.
 
Celestia: Well, on the very eve of the wedding of my niece, Princess Mi Amore Candenza and Captain Shining Armor, Equestria was being invaded by a mysterious enemy. We didn’t know who it was until that very day. Queen Chrysalis, ruler of the changelings, is a powerful being that thrives on love. As for right now, she must have known you for some strange reason and brought you here.
 
Me: (turn to Chrysalis) That was you who brought me here with that tornado?
 
Chrysalis: Right you are, human. As queen of the changelings, it is up to me to find food for my subjects. I have encountered the human race in the past, and they are not a very loving species.
 

 
This is the tenth comic page of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic parody of “The Wonderful Wizard of Oz” and it’s called, “The Wonderful Witch of Neigh’” (or MLP:FiM - TWWoN for short.)
 
When I had a dream in my sleep, I appeared in Ponyville in my same human form and my black-and-white stuffed cat that came to life where I meet all the ponies and this dream is based on “The Wonderful Wizard of Oz.” This is an animated/live-action story.
 
So it inspired me to make My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic parody of the Wonderful Wizard of Oz story and it’s called, “The Wonderful Witch of Neigh’s.” It is my adaptation of it, though it’s gonna be a little different and it has some songs from “The Wiz” and “The Wonderful Wizard of Ha’s”. It’s a mixture of few versions of The Wonderful Wizard of Oz. This story will be roleplayed by me and :iconcmdrnix:
 
The Ponyville is in the place of the Munchkinland.
 
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Cast:
 
Me aka KristinaD121 as Dorothy Gale in my human form
 
Twilight Sparkle as Auntie Em and Uncle Henry and Chimera from Ponyville, Equestia
 
Rarity as Auntie Em and Uncle Henry extra 1 and Rarily from Ponyville the town of Equestia
 
Rainbow Dash as Auntie Em and Uncle Henry extra 2 and Moonbow Shootingstar from Ponyville, Equestia
 
My stuffed black and white cat that came to life as Toto the dog
 
Princess Celestia as Glinda the Good Witch
 
The Cutie Mark Crusaders: Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloom and citizens of Ponyville as the Munchkins
 
Princess Luna in Nightmare Mare form as the Wicked Witch of the East (instead of get killed, she got knocked out after I landed on her on the head and she changed back into her good form, Princess Luna)
 
Queen Chrysalis as the Wicked Witch of the West
 
Changelings as the Winged Monkeys
 
Applejack as the Scarecrow and she is called Applestack the Scarecrow Pony and herself in the place of the farmhand in my home
 
Pinkie Pie as the Tin Man and she is called Clinkie Pie the Tin Pony and herself in the place of the farmhand in my home
 
Fluttershy as the Lion and she is called Cowerpaw the Cowardly Pony with her messy mane that is puffy as a lion’s mane and her tail is messy too and herself in the place of the farmhand in my home (her lion scared us when we arrived and Fluttershy told him not to scare people)
 
The Mayor of Ponyville as herself who impersonated the Witch of Neigh’s
 
Spike the Dragon as himself and Thorn from Ponyville, Equestia by Lushgreen City
 
Zecora the Zebra as Lushgreen City’s gatekeeper
 
Princess Mi Amore Cadenza (or Cadence for short) as herself
 
Trixie Lulamoon the Great and Powerful Magician as herself in the place of the ordinary man who impersonates the Witch of Neigh’s extra
 
Shining Armor as himself
 

 
There will no parents who will took place of Auntie Em and Uncle Henry in my own adaptation and that’ll be Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash and Rarity.
 
Make kind, nice, respectful, polite or positive comments please and even the fair, tiny critiques. Also, no mean/negative comments, no rude, mean critiques or criticisms, no trolls, no offense, no suggestions, no flames and no strong inappropiate language like with the “F” word because it makes me sad or angry, my creativity has no limits and this is IMPORTANT TO ME!!! Only I can make a self critique. If you don’t like this art or whatever, you don’t have to post a comment and keep those words to yourself!
 
But I need at least a fair, small critique. For example: “Criticized by :icontoshiakiburtonrp: - As for your attempt at a baggy shirt, I HIGHLY recommmend starting off with drawing the actual body of whoever you’re drawing FIRST, then you draw the clothes. Try looking for clothing and anatomy tutorials here on dA to help you out.”
 
Not mean, rude, insult critiques like this “Your style looks awful and I hate it!”
 
You can help me with my writing and grammar with critiques so I can let some of my friends edit my writing about what are they or any character is doing after they see the comics and actions like Laramie aka VeggieFanGirl did for me at Veggie Hearts, but you can’t criticize my drawings. This is my style and also, I used all the styles of the movie creators like Butch Hartman and Arlene Klasky who created the American animated television series, “Rugrats”.
 
Note: Sorry about this comic page and coloring. I’m too lazy to clean this whole comic page up so I don’t have time for this. It’s like I don’t have to clean it up entirely anymore because my friends or followers at school told me that I don’t need to. ^^;
 
Remember, Chrysalis’ wings are see-through before you’ll might criticize my mistakes since I look at all the pictures of her in this image gallery. mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Queen_Chrys
 
Style, Ponyville at Equestia, Queen Chrysalis the Changeling, Princess Celestia and Shining Armor (C) My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic by Lauren Faust at Hasbro Studios
 
Style on me as a human girl (C) *Chano-kun
 
Pony Sacrifice (cameo in the second panel or panel #2) (C) ~Peppermint-Breeze

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Kris: well chrysalis i really hate you so don’t thrive off my love
 
chrysalis: i’m not i’m gonna thrive off of sera’s love
 
me: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
 
luna: here put these on sera throws silver slippers
 
me:puts on silver slippers