@Mayojar77  
I clearly stated opinion and offered both critique and advice.
 
What’s your problem?

@MuffinSucker  
Just shut up. Expecting an artist to weave a tapestry of theatrics at every point is too much to ask, and frankly, you’re the only one complaining.

@Beau Skunky  
You know the ‘dead source’ tag is there for a reason.

Cute comic, but the source link doesn’t work for me.

more Apple fritters! :D

I half expected AJ to just drop that fritter on the ground, Card-Crusher style, after seeing that face of hers in panel 6.

I highly dislike comics that don’t tell a story at all. There’s no struggle, there’s no payoff. It’s trying to be something it’s not.
 
This whole ‘comic’ could be done in two panels with the exact same effect and impact.
 
ToxicMario can do cute comics, but these are just too common among his/her works and I encourage them to try harder on expanding their creativity. There’s also no shame in admitting you’re bad at writing, reach out to those that can.
 
 
I’d post this on the Deviantart page, but the source URL doesn’t seem to exist.  
You obviously have talent at composition and drawing the ponies, your comics need to become more engaging.