@Minus
You really like to nitpick. What a snarky guy.

@Background Pony #2BB0
Definitely. A half belly is no full belly.

Good heavens, we wouldn’t want them to be half-pregnant now, would we?

Holy cringe batman. Now this is show-writer level of creativity haha.

So did you take an image and then just add the text? If the text is 100% of what you did, why did you do it so poorly? I’m used to artists doing a great image and then adding text as an after thought and not paying attention to what they actually typed. It’s the classic case of celebrating just before the finish line and tripping. But this isn’t that, you only had the job of writing text, and you only had to make it understandable. From what I can roughly understand from this, it’s a low quality grimdark fic? So if written properly, I still don’t think it would be worth posting. Just make it a comment and post it on the original picture if you needed to share this so badly.

R.I.P. Candy*unt

Please for the love of Celestia, get a proofreader.

Well at least she had her fun until the end