Interesting story! Maybe it can be a fighting game by NetherRealm studio (Mortal Kombat re-make, Injustice: Gods Among Us) with a deeper story mode!

The story sounds stupid yet interesting. If it was well-written, I’d maybe read the fanfiction.

@CMIZAX  
like I said, it’s an abridged summarization, mainly to get the general idea across. if this were part of the show canon, then much of the gaps would most likely be filled in by other episodes (mostly from one centered around Silver Spoon).
 
yes, i am a strange people. but hey, “strange” is in the eye of the beholder, and sometimes a good thing anyway…

I won’t say that it’s bad, or even mediocre, it’s just kind of an awkwardly made story that kind of shoehorns some things into it in a low quality sort of way.
 
In short: it’s not perfect, but it’s certainly not as bad as a troll fic, atleast some of the ones I found.

@smashfan666  
Seriously man I’m telling you, don’t listen to these guys! They may say the writing is awful and you yourself may even have doubts, but I’ll tell you that the story surrounding this character is interesting and humorous at the same time, and makes me genuinely smile. Such simple joys are rare in life, and when something makes my day a little better (even if it is a silly story) I am grateful. So I say you should keep creating your art and share the tale of Tiara Ultima, and I promise that if you were to ever write a full length story about it I’d be an eager follower.
 
As for quality, maybe the criticisms are valid and its not the best, but as long as you have fun and even a few people enjoy the story, that is all that matters. Don’t forget as well that only by continues practice will you improve, so keep at it!

@Keith Mowz  
thanks, man. that means a lot :)

@smashfan666  
As a 25 year old who was diagnosed as a kid with moderate autism but learned over the years how to compensate for it, I hope your writing will eventually be age-appropriate in quality and you don’t let your mental differences define you as a person or make excuses for not overcoming your flaws.

wat

10/10 I would pay premium to see this movie in 3D at an Imax theater.

@Background Pony  
or the 1986 Transformers movie…

Wow, that sounds terrible. Like the MLP cast shoehorned into a bad shonen anime.

@Keith Mowz  
as an autistic 17 year old, i decidedly take only minimal offence to that…

I don’t think its crap. I just think it sounds like it was written by a 10 year old. Its only crap if you actually try to take it seriously.

The fuck.

This sounds hilariously idiotic. I’m glad I know where Tiara Ultima came from now though, lol.