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Champions of Equestria

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SiriusPoney

Poney Boy
The grimdark is grimdark, I belive what Twilight capable to become evil one day, but this too much.
Actually even when her friends getting old, time goes and I bet she found new friends, and even when her old friends gone she was surounded with many of new others.
Twililght Sparkle is a strong pony, she can handle the such of loosing, and she can handle to keep the sweet memories about old friends without damage to her and for her new friends.
Background Pony #018E
It makes some amount of sense for Twilight to become bitter, possibly even antagonistic, from the despair of losing her friends, but it’s EXTREMELY out of character for her to start KILLING people.
Even for an angry, bitter, eye-glowing alicorn Twilight, it doesn’t seem fitting to go that far.
Background Pony #4F16
@Background Pony #379B
? But that makes no sense. Its literally based approximately millenia in the future, and it’s SUPPOSED to be OOC.
And why do people care about it so much more now than when they did when the trend started?
If it’s supposed to be OOC, then why u removed this tag?
Dragonmage

It would be interesting to see Twilight in the role of antagonist against Sunny, maybe hunting Sunny down over a misunderstanding or as a villain in an alternate universe.
Background Pony #4F83
@Enmity1498
Same here a better way to defeat your enemy is to make them your friend that’s the one thing that my little pony friendship is magic forgot to tell us.
Eragor14
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
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My Little Pony - 1992 Edition

Sunny Starscout fan
I don’t like seeing Twilight like this at all, and I don’t care how far in the future the story takes place. I will never see Twilight being a murderer.