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Can you please improve my ocs to your likings?
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+-SH artist needed31549 +-SH safe2281367 +-SH artist:mario10151 +-SH oc1006463 +-SH oc only736365 +-SH oc:cooky phan7 +-SH oc:may tress7 +-SH equestria girls269377 +-SH g42138206 +-SH 1000 hours in ms paint7470 +-SH duo209716 +-SH female1923552 +-SH improvement78 +-SH meme97110 +-SH simple background643098 +-SH white background178514
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@Excited Dolphin
Good points. Getting inspiration from other artstyles or even praticing the original design for EQ Girls will help em along the way.
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-Proportions are ok. However, a lot of characters in the show themselves have disproportionally-looking long legs. Try to better it by bringing the mid-section down just a bit.
-Colors are pretty loud. You can still use those colors, but the issue is they just don’t blend. Left character, looks like they’re bald with ketchup on their head. styles are a bit Microsoft-painty.
-Havinf said that, try using Inkscape it some other drawing program where you can move the curves of the drawing around. MS Paint is harder to revert or make changes once you’ve already commit.
-Make any words look neater.
I think you just need to look at other drawings people make and try to make it make sense on yours.
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-Try observing how hair behaves from real life and other art styles
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