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(I won’t make the comic tag, until the comic is ready.)
Okay, I have a real announcement. I’m going to be working on my next pony comic. Equestria Six Shadows is my main focus. It will include all my monster ponies, including your OCs, if you support me on Patreon. The writing will be free to read, but the comic will remain on Patreon for some time. I’m not done with the writing yet, but I feel like I should share this now and then later. My Patreon https://www.patreon.com/BestPonies that is all. Enjoy the rest of your day.
Oh and I forgot to mention…. I will be, unfortunately canceling Nurses Take Over! My deeper apologies to anyone who was interested. It was just too much of a mess for me. But here how it would have ended…
Red Drop mother planned to ruin Gum Heart image and open her eyes to what these ponies have done to them in the past. Despite the long ass story she told her, Gum Heart wouldn’t accept it. She learned to move on from the past and focus on what matters now and that Red Herring should do the same. Red wanted to chat more, but she couldn’t, knowing the princess was on her way. So she revealed to Gum Heart that she absorbed Doctors Horse and left Nurse Red Heart on the floor somewhere. She then laughed and teleported away. Gum Heart left the room only to see in horror that the hospital was in a complete mess. Gooey Gum was wandering around the hospital until Twilight broke the silence and revealed her truth purpose of being here. She teleported out of Gooey stomach and told Gooey that she was never sick to begin with! She was faking it to see how long she would last inside Gooey Gum and see if Goo ponies were to be trusted. Gooey, being a bit confused, short of went with it. As long as she can go get something to eat. Suddenly, Fluttershy dashes into Twilight while being chased by Red Drop. Fluttershy main purpose of being there is to see if Twilight was okay, which is was. Suddenly, a bunch of slime ponies showed up and surrounded the two ponies. Twilight was going to TP out, but the Princess showed up that Princess being Princess Gumdrop. She demands her slime ponies to stand down and leave the hospital immediately. Once that was all cleared up, Princess Gumdrop used her magic to clean up the hospital, and she tanks Twilight for not harming any of her kinds. Twilight was pulled to the side by Fluttershy. She wanted to tell her about Overheal and everything… Meanwhile, Gum Heart tries sneaking away, but the Princess TP herself and Gum Heart outside the hospital for a little chat. In short, Princess Gumdrop stripped Gum Heart of her healing magic and forced her to return to the slime village. (Which is why Gum Heart is struggling to heal ponies in her stomach!) One week later, AJ was helping her family with bucking trees. The other was becoming tired of working until AJ slipped back into the scene, and she was suddenly glowing bright with pink lines all over her body. With a burst of energy, she quickly got to work. Meanwhile! At Blue Blood place… The mares he invited, including Rarity, were fed up with his synanigans and thought of leaving until Blue Blood opened the door to a… Yellow slime mare that licks her lips at the sight of each mare in the room. Blue Blood set back in watch as Lemon Drop took her time devouring each mare. (That is how it would have ended.)
Edit (I’m add the story here. At lest the first part.)
The first part of
Equestria Six Shadows.
*The mane six are often seen as heroes of Equestria. Yet no pony noticed the background pony. “If it wasn’t for Twilight and her friends, Equestria would’ve been completely overrun by Changelings.” They say. “If Twilight friends didn’t stop Nightmare Moon, Equestria would be plunged into eternal darkness.” They keep saying. “If Twilight didn’t stop Starlight Glimmer from going back in time, then Equestria wouldn’t exist.” And they still believe that we didn’t have a play in it. We’re just background ponies. Nothing more. Well, it’s about time we changed that.
Octavia’s house….
Octavia, peacefully sleeping away the morning until… Princess Celestia teleported inside her room.
Princess Celestia: “Good morning, Octavia! I have a job for you.” Octavia eyes shot open, and she turns to face Celestia. Celestia, her beaming smile reflected a bit of the sun in Octavia’s eyes, which she covered with a hoof.
Princess Celestia: “I need you to clear out a few slimeballs around Canterlot.”
Octavia: “Slimeballs?”
Celestia nods.
Celestia: “Yes, I’m unsure how those things keep appearing around Canterlot and Ponyville. It could have something to do with the Everfree Forest, but Fluttershy hasn’t seen anything leaving from there. So I’m leaving this in your hooves. Do be careful! They can be quite jumpy.” Before Octavia could say anything, Princess Celestia teleported away. As usual… Stepping out of bed, Octavia placed a knife to her side and trotted out her room and out of her house. It didn’t take Octavia long to find a slimeball causing a mess around town. Ponies run and scream out the mane six names. Ah yes, the heroes of Equestri- Suddenly, a slime launches itself towards Octavia and lands in her open mouth. This caught her off guard as she nearly stumbled onto the ground. The slime quickly got to work, wiggling, and forcing itself down Octavia’s throat. All Octavia could do is simply accept her little friend and gulp the rest of it down. Her belly bulges and growls as the intruder makes itself at home. Octavia sighed and made sure to ready herself for any more incoming slimeballs. Just as she prepared herself, a few slimeballs surrounded her. Octavia pulled out her sharp knife and waited for one of them to make a move. The green slime jumps towards her, which she quickly dodges and slices the slime into two. Then, she performs the same action onto the other slimes. They went down pretty easily… until she realized that there were more slimeballs than there were before. It seems cutting them doesn’t affect them as much. And just like that, Octavia was quickly swarmed by them. Each slimeball making their way inside her body. Through her mouth, her ears, her butt and her mare bits. So many have entered her stomach that her belly bulges are larger and more active. Octavia can feel every movement of those slimeballs inside her stomach. She felt like her stomach was going to burst open at any moment. Suddenly, Octavia hears a familiar voice.
Vinyl: “Yo Tavi!.. Err… Your belly is having the same problem I just went through.” Octavia looks up and sees Vinyl Scratch standing over her head.
Vinyl: “Don’t worry, I got just what you need to melt those gumdrops down.” Without giving the details, Vinyl pulls out a potion from her bag and puts it in Octavia’s mouth. Octavia nearly choked on the purple liquid that was now entering her stomach. She immediately can feel those slimeballs struggling and fighting to get away until their struggling stops. Octavia’s stomach growls loudly and slowly shrinks to normal size. Octavia felt relief and less stress now that her stomach was back to normal. She gets up and looks at Vinyl, who is winking at her.
Octavia: “Well, that certainly solved one problem… Thanks, Vinyl.” Vinyl smile
Vinyl: “Anything Tavi.~” Octavia felt a little annoyed that Vinyl was still calling her Tavi instead of Octavia.*
But now is not the time to argue. There are more slimeballs to take care of. Octavia picked up her knife and placed it back in its holder.
Octavia: “If I may ask, where did you get that potion from?” Vinyl smirk
Vinyl: “I bought it from a suspicious looking mare around Ponyville. She said something about… I see your future, here you must take these potions. Pretty cool, am I right?”
Octavia: “I suppose so -” Suddenly, a loud cry can be heard from a distance.
Vinyl: “Riiihgt, we should probably go help whoever that is.” Octavia and Vinyl made their way to the center of Canterlot. Those slimeballs were forcing their way down ponies throats and, in any part, that allowed them to enter inside their bodies. Octavia had a shocked expression when those slimeballs entered a stallion cock. His balls were completely filled with those slimeballs. Vinyl put a hoof to her chin.
Vinyl: “This stuff is freaky, but I wonder why they are feeding themselves to us?” Octavia rolls her eyes.
Octavia: “I would like to know the answer after we help these ponies.” Octavia rushes over to a pony in need of help. Fleur de Lis was doing her best to help Fancy Pants with his… balls problems. Those slimeballs slip right into his cock and are actively moving inside his balls. Fleur de Lis only had one way of helping him, and that was to suck those slimeballs right out of his balls. She proceeds to do just that while slimes were entering her body through her two backdoors. Meanwhile, Octavia gave the ponies with full bellies the same potion that Vinyl gave to her. It works perfectly on them, shrinking their bellies back to normal size. Vinyl backed up to Octavia, and she looked at her before seeing a huge slimeball devouring ponies nearby.
Vinyl: “Where the fuck did that thing come from?” She said in a fearful tone in her voice. Octavia tries to remain calm and put on her brave face.
Octavia: “Well, wherever it came from, let’s kindly show it the exit.” Octavia charged forward at the large slimeball and whipped out her knife and stabbed the slime with all her might. However, her attack did nothing to stop the large slimeball from just pulling her inside it. Vinyl with a shocked expression snapped out of it and pulled out the big guns. She plugs up her large speaker to a nearby outlet and turns up the music to the maximum volume. Musical notes fired towards the slimeball with intense speed. The slimeball was nearly being blown to bits by the loud music. Vinyl smirked as everything was going smoothly until… A small slimeball ate one of her large speakers, causing the music to be weaker and less affected towards the large slimeball. Vinyl looked back at the small slime and couldn’t believe what had just happened. Before she could make a move, the large slimeball swarmed her, devouring her and the speakers as well. Meanwhile, at Minuette’s house…. Minuette was in the middle of brushing her teeth when Princess Luna appeared behind her. This causes Minuette to jump a bit before turning around to face Princess Luna. Princess Luna spoke in her royal voice.
Luna: “IT IS TIME FOR BATTLE LITTLE PONY! YOU SHELL FIGHT IN THE NAME OF EQUESTRIA AND COME OUT UNDEFEATED! NOW GO, AND PROTECT OUR PONIES FROM THOSE SLIMEBALLS!” Princess Luna teleported away and possibly gave Minuette tinnitus with her long and loud speech. Setting down her toothbrush, Minuette dusted off her magic spell book and trotted out her house. She made her way to the center of Canterlot to find a large slimeball devouring anything in sight. Every voice in Minuette’s head was telling her to run away as far as possible, but she silenced those voices and opened her magic book. Her horn glowed bright as she prepared the spell to be cast. Inside the large slimeball… Octavia slowly came to consciousness and saw ponies floating around her. Octavia, with a more panicked expression, tries swimming through the gooeyness, but her movements are slow and weaken from the slime body.
Octavia felt a little afraid that she’ll end up being absorbed by this slime monster. Just as that thought entered her mind, she watched in horror as each pony around her slowly dissolved before her eyes. She jumps a bit from a sudden touch on her back. Octavia turns to see Vinyl pointing at something outside of the large slimeball. Minuette performs the spell…
Minuette: “It’s ready! Get a load of this!” The sky darkened, the clouds turned gray, darkness surrounded the area, leaving the only light coming from Minuette’s horn. Her horn glowed brighter than the sun itself she ready her body and fired a yellow beam at the large slimeball. It blew a hole in the center of it. Minuette wiped the sweat from her forehead and looked up at the slimeball. Her attack was successful, but it didn’t do any real damage to the slimeball. All it did was make the slimeball larger than before.
Minuette: “Yikes!… Uhh… Are you interested in learning how to bru-…” The slimeball rolls onto Minuette and continues to cause chaos around Canterlot. Meanwhile, at Twilight Sparkle castle. Twilight Sparkle is sweeping up dust off her floor with multiple brooms. She stopped after suddenly feeling her cutie mark glowing.
Twilight: “Ooh!~ Another friendship problem? Spike! Can you sweep the floor for me?” She asked while trotting out the castle. Back to Canterlot… Octavia, Vinyl, and Minuette felt completely helpless to what was coming next. They can already feel their body slowly dissolved into the slime gooeyness. Darkness clouds Octavia’s vision, her eyes slowly start to close, and her friends’ muffled screams were the last thing she heard… Suddenly, her body hit the ground hard, causing her to feel dizzy. Octavia managed to look up and see none other than Princess Twilight Sparkle. With each step she took, a pony is teleported out of the large slimeball.
Twilight Sparkle: “Fear not everypony! I’m here to save the day!” With everypony out of the slime monster, Twilight Sparkle shrinks the large slimeball to a smaller size and puts it in a jar. Everyone ran up to Twilight Sparkle and praised her for saving Canterlot from those slimeballs. Twilight, of course, took all the credit from the three mares who had a hoof in helping those ponies…
Vinyl: “You know, I was totally about to save the day until that little bastard ate my speaker…”
Minuette: “Sweet Luna, why didn’t I think of a shrinking spell…” Octavia remains silent and watches as Twilight gives everypony an autograph. The day has officially ended…
(I didn’t go too much into detail because I’m going to draw it out later. Thanks for reading.~)

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