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Description
Commission for Citizenwolf
-The Latex Council (COLOR)(here)
-The Latex Council (RED) (soon)
-The Latex Council (soon)
Story:
Deep within the castle walls, it’s hallways have fallen silent, the perfect setting for a clandestine meeting. The train from the Crystal Kingdom was late and several hours had passed before Cadence would finally arrive, this was not the first time however that her tardiness would delay proceedings…. The Latex council having grown tired of the constant excuses decided on this occasion to pass judgment on the latecomer, leading to punishments that would never be made known to anyone else…
Part 1: Princesses Meeting Latex COLOR
Other :
-Latex Color Suit Trixie and Starlight
Please, dont forget to leave a comment, I want know how improved my work.
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You want a commission ? go here : Commission Chart
Art by : Damlanil
You can Follow on the other websites :
| Deviantart | Twitter | Furaffinity |
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-The Latex Council (COLOR)(here)
-The Latex Council (RED) (soon)
-The Latex Council (soon)
Story:
Deep within the castle walls, it’s hallways have fallen silent, the perfect setting for a clandestine meeting. The train from the Crystal Kingdom was late and several hours had passed before Cadence would finally arrive, this was not the first time however that her tardiness would delay proceedings…. The Latex council having grown tired of the constant excuses decided on this occasion to pass judgment on the latecomer, leading to punishments that would never be made known to anyone else…
Part 1: Princesses Meeting Latex COLOR
Other :
-Latex Color Suit Trixie and Starlight
Please, dont forget to leave a comment, I want know how improved my work.
#################################
You want a commission ? go here : Commission Chart
Art by : Damlanil
You can Follow on the other websites :
| Deviantart | Twitter | Furaffinity |
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@Ereiam
Since I’m the one who commissioned the piece I can confirm Google Translate was used on that one, Dimondium figured it out straight away. For a bit of context for you all, while Damlanil himself is a native French speaker, I myself am not so I do apologise for how the dialogue turned out to be a little bit disjointed :/
While the phrase works alright on its own, when combined with the English opening it doesn’t mesh quite correctly in either direction (French to English or English to French). I know french has lots subtleties and a lot of that was lost quite literally in (google) translation!
My initial idea was that it would be cool to do like a Dual language thing for extra flavour, so I figured with the judgement it would be more intimidating/sexy to have them speak in French, but in practical terms the semantics don’t connect properly. Its a case of I can’t fully proof read his French dialogue and He can’t fully proof-read my English dialogue without a little bit of machine translation (but we are learning as we go along and discussing where to go!)
Hope that clears things up :)
@Nova Saber 97
That was the idea I was trying going for, I’m glad you like it :)
Most likely it was used. But can you really deny the power those words give? “You will be punished!” How will she be punished? What would it look like? Does it get sexier than this?
Well, I’m not the one who wrote it. I did think vous was odd, but it’s my understanding that it is appropriate when addressing royalty (even if singular), so I can at least see how it wormed its way in.
…though yeah, the fact that it’s not properly gendered is something I can’t really justify from any angle. Come to think of it, that’s exactly how Google Translate phrases it when plugging in “you will be punished” (aside from making it punis, not puni), so I can’t help but wonder if it was used here.
Point is, that’s how it’d sound in English. :P
Edited
As a Frenchman, I can’t help but point out that “Cadance, tu seras punie !!” would’ve been more gramatically accurate (you need to make the verb agree with the subject’s gender, hence the silent “e” at the end of “puni”; also, I believe the intimate context doesn’t require the formal plural to address Cadance — especially when she’s at the receiving end of the power exchange).
Edited because: Markdown syntax
Ominous. But I like it.