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kiimaro

The story line in this comic is horrible. It’s all over the place, it goes from one scene to the next without any kind of explanation as to what’s going on. One minute AJ is going out with Twilight the next scene she’s having sex with Rainbow Dash in a barn. Then she’s pregnant and Twilight only finds out 7 months after she was impregnated and sometimes there’s a panel that just exists but doesn’t serve ANY purpose to the story line.  
All in all, needs a lot of work.
carvin

The fuck is this shit? This one, the last one… seem like disjointed poorly planned comics in a decent series. I looked at the rest… turns out that these are the most planned out comics in a terrible series.
441TheSecond
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Escapee from Alcatraz
Ok, this here is one of the biggest issues of the comic, aside from major pacing issues.  
Just previous page, RD was playfully asking if she’d make a good father.  
Now in this page, her pregnancy is being treated as something huge and dramatic.  
It’s like this comic doesn’t know what it wants to be.