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The first page of Party of One my first comic I hope you enjoy
 
Special thanks to KopaLeo for helping me with the correct and translation of the pages
 
Cover >>1638029
 
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Page 2 >>1638380 (merged)

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Background Pony #212D
I don’t think this guy would have passed his psychiatry clerkship in 3rd year of medical school, much less actually become a shrink, haha. People skills!
Background Pony #A91B
@The-luna-fan  
Actually, I think so too, the wording is a bit off.  
Rather than “He is the only one who succeeded. She confesses” i’d go for a “He’s the only one who has managed to take a confession from her.”  
Another one: “Finally, time to take a little break.” would be more faithful to the original spanish meaning.  
The Dr Brave’s speech is also quite wrong. “Well, Cadance. According to your records, you haven’t answer to any of our treatments, started many fights with the auxiliaries and even more so, managed to get isolated from the other patients since you came here.”
 
I hope it helps.
Background Pony #30EE
Corrections need a lot more work, but this looks promising so far. Looking forward to more! :)