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“Fade Into the background”
 
This is a little event I come up for all my patron to have some fun. It’s a story of young hybrid pony-changeling who try to find her father.
 
This is “Your Decide Picture series”. Or I call it “Comment Driven Story”. All of patrons will decide what happens in this story.
 
If you don’t know what is “Comment Driven Story” See this “Moonstuck” as the example woonastuck.tumblr.com/page/187
 
This series is free to read for all of you in every time it reach 2 pages. But if you want the chance to comment and decide the action of young queen. You can join by being my patron. “All” of patrons can join this event. Even you give just 1$ per month you still can join this and get early access on this series!!
 
Have fun to watch my young queen journey. Everyone! XD
 
My Patron : www.patreon.com/vavacung

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Background Pony #D9B9
@Warrior_Kitten  
The romance story and the fact that many of the options say Marry Him or Kiss Him seems to show she has an interest. Also, as mentioned before, his reaction to being kissed by the little queen (he initiated the kiss, and blushed afterwards, and this was after cuddling with her for a long time to allow her to gain some love) seems to indicate he has some as well. Yes, we could collectively steer the story away from a romance, but it’s kind of obvious which direction Loveless is pointing. And considering the people who follow Loveless adore romance, I think it’ll go that way.
Warrior_Kitten
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
Non-Fungible Trixie -
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Not a Llama - Happy April Fools Day!

Electric Bulwark
@Warrior_Kitten
So which is it? Did I read too deeply, or not enough? Pick one.
In all honesty, though, how else could this possibly end? Do you think this romance legend comes out of nowhere for no reason?
 
You do realise it’s possible to do both, right? To not read enough, but read too deeply into what you have read.
 
I do believe the romance story has some connections into what is going on - it’s why Regis is attacking after all - but I don’t think this is going in the direction you seem to think it’s going. Such a linear direction relies too much on the “players” making specific choices, otherwise the choices don’t really matter, which is what I’ve been saying.
 
Regardless, I’d say drop this, it’s gone on long enough.
Background Pony #D9B9
@Warrior_Kitten  
So which is it? Did I read too deeply, or not enough? Pick one.
 
In all honesty, though, how else could this possibly end? Do you think this romance legend comes out of nowhere for no reason?
Warrior_Kitten
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
Non-Fungible Trixie -
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Not a Llama - Happy April Fools Day!

Electric Bulwark
@Warrior_Kitten
Well, honestly it seems like the prince is fighting out of a sense of obligation. He didn’t expect to be befriended by the little princess, and he came here for a war.
 
Uhhhhh, have you been following the story? He exploited the Princess specifically to get into the hive. He used her, being a friend because he knew she was naive enough to lead him to a way in.
Background Pony #D9B9
@Warrior_Kitten  
Well, honestly it seems like the prince is fighting out of a sense of obligation. He didn’t expect to be befriended by the little princess, and he came here for a war.
Warrior_Kitten
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
Non-Fungible Trixie -
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Not a Llama - Happy April Fools Day!

Electric Bulwark
What sucks about this “fight” is that it feels like it’s setup for the Princess to fail. Like, Regis has skill to counter the forms the Princess has that counter Fire Dragons, he also utterly ignores any taunting. And option selected by the “players” just to talk and not taunt, results in taunting, which again fails. There’s no option thus far that has actually worked on Regis. All of it has resulted in failure, or taking more damage.
 
Yes, I get it, he’d be a boss if this were a game. But even bosses took some effect from taunting / attacks and at least seemed beatable. Not this OP unbeatable Regis.
Background Pony #2D33
She better stop trying to tease him (and failing), she is getting a very notable debuff.
Background Pony #D9B9
Heh, the armies in the background offering food exchange. “Please? We’re starving, and we have gems.”