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Part 3 of a Dinky-Shortround storyline.
 
(THIS story is happening before/around the start of season 1. The earlier-written Dash-Shortround story is happening in season 7.)
 
 
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dziadek1990
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
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@Beau Skunky
 
I will mainly try to write her as an Accidental Jerk.
 
And every time she realizes she’s hurting people she’ll be all “Holy Fu**, dude! I’m sorry!” D:
dziadek1990
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@NLTLF
 
:) Dude, how can RD be nice before learning her lessons? That would be unrealistic.
 
And I am recently starting writing in advance in the descriptions the info whether the events are happening in season 1 or 7, so people can SEE the progress that she’s made…
 
(At least I’ll try to keep mentioning what Season’s events are being shown. My discipline’s not perfect.)
 
…and if they see no progress in RD’s behavior, THEN they will rightly conclude “Damn! This guy’s version of RD is so stubborn and a slow learner!”
 
 
Problem: many people just look at singular images here.
 
They will only judge a single one by itself, and assume that it is the only version of RD that I accept. :)
dziadek1990
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@NLTLF
 
‘Kay. Conveniently this is happening in a flashback (in season 1).
 
So whenever I’ll want to write a Likable Dash, I’ll write her in the timeline of later seasons, after she learned her lessons.
 
And whenever I’ll be randomly in a mood for a Jerkass Dash, I’ll show her in Season 1, before she learned life lessons.
 
RISK: People will assume that Jerkass Dash is the only Dash I write.
 
But, eh… Even some stories that I wrote and I love have been downvoted. WORTH IT!
 
 
(Also, pssst…. my characters also know sarcasm + hyperboles……… so both the readers, and my characters’ friends have to sometimes guess whether the character is being serious or just kidding… :O )
NLTLF
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NLTLF
@dziadek1990
 
i don’t know, maybe make her egotism a little less than her ENTIRE character. just being narcissistic for the sake of being narcissistic isn’t funny. maybe instead of making her want to force short people to fight for her entertainment, make her a bit more of a likable character. or maybe use this same skit but instead of dash, use a more fitting character, one who’s more likely to act like her in this scenario.
dziadek1990
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@Beau Skunky
 
I thought hard, and concluded what would Dinky do, if they ignored her “one-night stand” question long enough.
 
(And if I avoided the boring “Your mom will tell you when you grow up, Dinky!” - “Okay…” and other scenarios as such.)
 
Namely:
 
I am pretty sure that even though Derpy told Dinky about ALL SORTS of things “a nice pony shouldn’t do”, Derpy never specifically told Dinky that it is rude to tickle.
 
Since Dinky is small, and wouldn’t cause much trouble to adults (from Derpy’s POV)
 
…except to Shortround.
 
My mind entered a following scene:
 
Dinky immobilizes and keeps tickling Shortround to give her the answer tickle torture!, and Rainbow is Rolling On The Floor Laughing (and will only save Shortround when there will be a risk of him spilling the beans and giving the definition of the Inappropriate Term to a kid.)
 
End scene.
dziadek1990
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
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@Beau Skunky
 
Question: Which aspect of Dash felt most Flanderized?
 
(I don’t mind writing flawed characters, cuz people ARE flawed, but which part of her seemed unrealistic as a person? She is 18 btw here in this flashback… yeah, a super promiscuous youth.)
dziadek1990
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@Beau Skunky
 
:) Conveniently, this is a flashback.
 
My stories’ “Present” is in season 7, and this is The Past (in season 1).
 
I will now have to think if Dash dislikes her own behavior now and if she will change in this aspect by the time the season 7 comes.
 
And in what way will she change her behavior… and because of who’s words.
 
Perhaps she will get crabs one too many times, or will mature emotionally in some less cliche/silly way…