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first time making a little comic would love to here some feed back
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+-SH suggestive198356 +-SH artist:vo-photoshop10 +-SH princess celestia117739 +-SH twilight sparkle373377 +-SH alicorn339580 +-SH pony1717000 +-SH unicorn589465 +-SH g42140226 +-SH abdominal bulge10801 +-SH accidental vore182 +-SH bed63726 +-SH book46215 +-SH comic141789 +-SH dialogue101448 +-SH female1926078 +-SH fetish61553 +-SH horn252316 +-SH magic102812 +-SH pillow28016 +-SH princess vorestia593 +-SH soft vore1597 +-SH spread wings107411 +-SH stomach noise5386 +-SH teleportation804 +-SH teleportation mishap43 +-SH teleportation vore26 +-SH televortation26 +-SH unicorn twilight38262 +-SH vore20450 +-SH wings254878
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your not looking are you https://derpicdn.net/img/2015/2/26/837540/large.png
Thanks so much radpanic for the feed back!!!
The outline of Celestia’s belly doesn’t match up with her chest, so it looks like the belly just abruptly ends behind her foreleg. I’d suggest editing the chest to make it match.
And the dialogue needs punctuation.