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Duck - He literally asked for this
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Friendship, Art, and Magic (2018) - Celebrated Derpibooru's six year anniversary with friends.
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Birthday Cake - Celebrated MLP's 7th birthday
Friendship, Art, and Magic (2017) - Celebrated Derpibooru's five year anniversary with friends.
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

[screams in German]
This is just wrong.
 
What if they made a SpikeDash fanfic or even a picture?!
 
Its Armageddon, men!  
and woman…
 
Starly >:D
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Background Pony #34C6
It was originally supposed to be an awkward one-shot with an ambiguous conclusion, but then I started thinking about Spike’s parents and adding some more fan-depth to Spike’s past. Currently working on the sequel, so I aim to improve quality overall.
 
Thanks for the feedback nontheless. Still with I knew who uploaded this… ah well-free,unexpected publicity is free, eh?
 
-JusticeSnake
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Lium
Since the Beginning -

Hey, it’s heads and shoulders above most of the trash you find on Fimfic. Looking for a decent fic in there is like searching for a diamond in a sewer; you might discover one but it’s more likely you’ll find shit.
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soundtea
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My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
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The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Ocellus is best buggo
^  
For a tip: try puting a conflict that relates to their relationship. (AJ’s family not having any of it, general shock from a good amount of Ponyville, Twilight trying to sabotage it…)
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Background Pony #34C6
Okay, I had the goal in mind to write the first AppleSpike story. I’m still happy that I finished it, though I admit it could use improvement.  
No regrets!
 
-JusticeSnake
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Lium
Since the Beginning -

Starly is right, again. But Applespike’s not terrible, honestly. Though I prefer it when it’s humanized.
 
As for the fic, it started out okay and then kinda got worse so I stopped after the first couple of chapters.
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soundtea
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My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
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Ocellus is best buggo
@BP4  
Yeah, I can see that. Just throwing an unrelated conflict on some random couple is really jarring. Worse when the conflict has no explanation.
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Background Pony #5339
@Soundtea
 
Its not about the conflict ITSELF. The conflict is welcomed, but when you fail to explain the reason why it exists, nor the motives behind it, then it becomes unnecessary.
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soundtea
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Wallet After Summer Sale -
Not a Llama - Happy April Fools Day!
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A Perfectly Normal Pony - <soundtea> fappin to cartoon horses
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Ocellus is best buggo
>unesscesary conflicts
 
Dammit people. Can’t you write a shipfic that’s just a nice, awkward romance then ends in real love?
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Background Pony #5339
@Rothy
 
The whole premise of applespike was nice and really well executed, but when they introduced the whole dragon war thing it turned into an unnecessary battle. There was no reason for the conflict, it was just created to fuck up their relationship.
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Background Pony #5339
The fanfic was fine, until they fucked it up in the third chapter and onwards.
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