Lunardrift
"[@Kaden Bayne Vanciel":](/1546431#comment_6546606
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Oh, I am sorry to have assumed your age(no this isn't sarcasm, i'm actually sorry, I've been dealing with annoying kids a lot today<, also thank you for being respectful with our argument here, most people usually get pissy and curse for no real reason), thank you for notifying the person who made these, and what I meant was the stories need more detail which these are really lacking, the concept is mostly fine and the editing is on good, but the writing is my real problem(the whole OCxCannon(s) ship thing is something i'm mostly indifferent about)
Biggest loser
Oh, I am sorry to have assumed your age(no this isn't sarcasm, i'm actually sorry, I've been dealing with annoying kids a lot today