(I am really sorry for spamming again.) hi again phantom shadow. So sorry to bother you again but but could you please review the plot? (everything that happens in the story)
 
How’s the story coming on? What chapter are you on?
 
Also how’s the cover art? I just had this idea to add to the cover. We do exactly what we planned but You could add Scootaloo behind masked Scootaloo. It will represent that the masked Scootaloo (male Scootaloo “Scott”) is Scootaloo in disguised. You could also add other characters on the cover if you want. What do you think? If yes, who or what?
 
Also, did you come up with chlothing designs for the characters for normal days and masks and chlothing for the masquerade?
 
Also I changed the kiss scene a tiny bit. You can add some detail if you want but I was thinking When the spell wears off, everyone gasped, then people either faint, snicker, has their jaws dropped, shocked, spits drink, whipers, or drops drink or food. Then before Scootaloo explains everything, pinkie exposes it really fast in one breathe saying,
 
“you had a crush on sweetie belle since you were eight and you were too shy to tell her because you assumed that she was straight and you were planning on confessing your feelings to sweetie belle by sending a secret admirer letter which was suggested by Lyra and Bon Bon then you chickened out after you put it in the mailbox and had to chase after a mail truck driven by derpy around in a high speed carchase with Gilda and you were heartbroken when button mash asked sweetie belle to the dance and asked her out first and decided to go to twilight and she along with Trixie and starlight casted the spell making you a guy so you had more confidence to ask her out!”
 
“How did you know?” Scootaloo asked.
 
“Just a hunch.” Pinkie said.
 
Sweetie asks if this is true and she says yes. She could say something like.  
“Ever since we’re friends, I always sort of had a crush on you. I was too shy and embarrassed to tell you because I assumed that you were straight. And you probably know the rest. I’m so sorry sweetie belle. I didn’t mean for any of this to happen. Before anyone says anything I want you all to know that I love sweetie belle and I don’t care what anyone thinks. I don’t care if you say no just as long as we can stay fri-” sweetie belle stood on her tippy toes and plants a small kiss on her cheek interrupting Scootaloo making her blush. Sweetie belle gigged at the blushing and said.
 
“Scootaloo I like you too. I was also to shy to tell you and I was waiting for you but it never happened. I decided to make the feelings go away by going to the masquerade ball with button mash but my feelings for you are so strong that it didn’t go.”
 
Scootaloo: “so are we an item?”
 
Sweetie belle: does this answer your question? (Pulls out red lipstick and applys it on and tackles Scootaloo to the ground kissing Scootaloo all over her face leaving kiss marks all over her face while Scootaloo blushes and giggles. Everyone cheers.(people either cry tears of joy, whistle, woo, ooh, awww, record it on their phone.(who will do what kind of reaction? You can pick other reactions.) scootaloos face is covered with kisses and her face is completely red. She also has a goody grin. She the. Says, “ill take that as a yes.” Scootaloo leans forward and plants a passionate kiss on sweetie belles lips. It caught her by surprise at first, but melts into it. Everyone once again cheers. And the dance continues with vinyl scratch playing the music again. Octavia provided music with her cello (it’s recorded) and everyone dances with their somebody. Scootaloo says to sweetie belle I love you and sweetie belle does the same. They then share a passionate kiss. Button mash was watching and plans revenge (the plans for revenge won’t be announced til the sequal)
 
Here are the pairings of who will dance with who for the slow dance (these are also the characters who will be in the fanfic)  
Fluttershy and rainbow dash  
Twilight and pinkie pie  
Rarity and applejack  
Lyra and Bon Bon  
Doctor and derpy  
Soarin and spitfire  
Dinky and pipsqueak  
Twist and snails  
Silverspoon and snips  
Spike and ember  
Rumble and (whoever you like)  
Fancy pants and (who ever you want)  
Sonata and Aria  
Sunset and adagio  
Vinyl and Octavia  
Diamond and applebloom  
Filthy rich and spoiled rich  
Shining armor and candence  
Big Mac and sugar belle  
Feather bangs and cheerlie (or one of the three mares who were swooning for him or better yet the three mares argue for him.)
 
What do you think. You can add some stuff if you want. Any details or characters you added. Also maybe diamond tiara will reform in the end starting developing romantic feelings for applebloom when she asked her to dance with her. What do you think?  
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hi again phantom shadow. So sorry to bother you again but but could you please review the plot? (everything that happens in the story)
 
How’s the story coming on? What chapter are you on?
 
Also how’s the cover art? I just had this idea to add to the cover. We do exactly what we planned but You could add Scootaloo behind masked Scootaloo. It will represent that the masked Scootaloo (male Scootaloo “Scott”) is Scootaloo in disguised. You could also add other characters on the cover if you want. What do you think? If yes, who or what?
 
Also, did you come up with chlothing designs for the characters for normal days and masks and chlothing for the masquerade?
 
Also I changed the kiss scene a tiny bit. You can add some detail if you want but I was thinking When the spell wears off, everyone gasped, then people either faint, snicker, has their jaws dropped, shocked, spits drink, whipers, or drops drink or food. Then before Scootaloo explains everything, pinkie exposes it really fast in one breathe saying,
 
“you had a crush on sweetie belle since you were eight and you were too shy to tell her because you assumed that she was straight and you were planning on confessing your feelings to sweetie belle by sending a secret admirer letter which was suggested by Lyra and Bon Bon then you chickened out after you put it in the mailbox and had to chase after a mail truck driven by derpy around in a high speed carchase with Gilda and you were heartbroken when button mash asked sweetie belle to the dance and asked her out first and decided to go to twilight and she along with Trixie and starlight casted the spell making you a guy so you had more confidence to ask her out!”
 
“How did you know?” Scootaloo asked.
 
“Just a hunch.” Pinkie said.
 
Sweetie asks if this is true and she says yes. She could say something like.  
“Ever since we’re friends, I always sort of had a crush on you. I was too shy and embarrassed to tell you because I assumed that you were straight. And you probably know the rest. I’m so sorry sweetie belle. I didn’t mean for any of this to happen. Before anyone says anything I want you all to know that I love sweetie belle and I don’t care what anyone thinks. I don’t care if you say no just as long as we can stay fri-” sweetie belle stood on her tippy toes and plants a small kiss on her cheek interrupting Scootaloo making her blush. Sweetie belle gigged at the blushing and said.
 
“Scootaloo I like you too. I was also to shy to tell you and I was waiting for you but it never happened. I decided to make the feelings go away by going to the masquerade ball with button mash but my feelings for you are so strong that it didn’t go.”
 
Scootaloo: “so are we an item?”
 
Sweetie belle: does this answer your question? (Pulls out red lipstick and applys it on and tackles Scootaloo to the ground kissing Scootaloo all over her face leaving kiss marks all over her face while Scootaloo blushes and giggles. Everyone cheers.(people either cry tears of joy, whistle, woo, ooh, awww, record it on their phone.(who will do what kind of reaction? You can pick other reactions.) scootaloos face is covered with kisses and her face is completely red. She also has a goody grin. She the. Says, “ill take that as a yes.” Scootaloo leans forward and plants a passionate kiss on sweetie belles lips. It caught her by surprise at first, but melts into it. Everyone once again cheers. And the dance continues with vinyl scratch playing the music again. Octavia provided music with her cello (it’s recorded) and everyone dances with their somebody. Scootaloo says to sweetie belle I love you and sweetie belle does the same. They then share a passionate kiss. Button mash was watching and plans revenge (the plans for revenge won’t be announced til the sequal)
 
Here are the pairings of who will dance with who for the slow dance (these are also the characters who will be in the fanfic)  
Fluttershy and rainbow dash  
Twilight and pinkie pie  
Rarity and applejack  
Lyra and Bon Bon  
Doctor and derpy  
Soarin and spitfire  
Dinky and pipsqueak  
Twist and snails  
Silverspoon and snips  
Spike and ember  
Rumble and (whoever you like)  
Fancy pants and (who ever you want)  
Sonata and Aria  
Sunset and adagio  
Vinyl and Octavia  
Diamond and applebloom  
Filthy rich and spoiled rich  
Shining armor and candence  
Big Mac and sugar belle  
Feather bangs and cheerlie (or one of the three mares who were swooning for him or better yet the three mares argue for him.)
 
What do you think. You can add some stuff if you want. Any details or characters you added. Also maybe diamond tiara will reform in the end starting developing romantic feelings for applebloom when she asked her to dance with her. What do you think?

hi again phantom shadow. How’s the story coming on? What chapter are you on?
 
Also how’s the cover art? I just had this idea to add to the cover. We do exactly what we planned but You could add Scootaloo behind masked Scootaloo. It will represent that the masked Scootaloo (male Scootaloo “Scott”) is Scootaloo in disguised. What do you think?
 
Also please Could you review everthing that happens in the story with detail please?

hi again phantom shadow. How’s the story coming on? What chapter are you on?
 
Also how’s the cover art? I just had this idea to add to the cover. We do exactly what we planned but You could add Scootaloo behind masked Scootaloo. It will represent that the masked Scootaloo (male Scootaloo “Scott”) is Scootaloo in disguised. What do you think?
 
Also please Could you review everthing that happens in the story with detail please?

Could you review everthing that happens in the story with detail please?

@Background Pony #5F84  
It’ll be rated E/K+. Also, the genres will probably be romance, comedy, alternate universe, humanized, and slice of life.

Hi again. How’s the story coming on? What chapter are you on? Is it being posted on the sites yet?
 
Also, please tell me everything that happens in the story from start to finish with detail please? I want to review fm what happens in it.
 
Also, will this be rated e, t, or m and will it be rated k, k+, t, or m?
 
Also, what genre or genres will this fall into? Slice of life, Romance, comedy, adventure, alternate universe, drama, fantasy or is it going to be a mixture of genres?

Could you review everything that happens in the story in order from start to finish. (Maybe give me a timeline of what happens in each chapter with detail) I like to review stuff just to be sure I know what’s going on.
 
I have one quick question. Does shipping Scootaloo with sweetie belle remind you of or feel like shipping buttercup with bubbles?

good. Now that situation is cleared up. I have a few things to ask.
 
Could you review everything that happens in the story in order from start to finish. I like to review stuff just to be sure I know what’s going on.
 
I have one quick question. Does shipping Scootaloo with sweetie belle remind you of or feel like shipping buttercup with bubbles? [/bq]  
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@Background Pony #7FB7  
It’s okay.

Phantom shadow I am so sorry. I found a YouTube channel that said phantom shadow and I though it wasn’t the same phantom shadow on other websites like deviant art and FiMFiction I was reading and looking at for the past year at first. Then the pieces came together and it took me a while to find out without even trying that you were the same person. Again, I sincerely apologize.

Hi again. So Oh okay I’ll try to be patient. I can be impatient but I’ll try my best.
 
Also, yes you can review everything that happens in the story in order from start to finish. I like to review stuff just to be sure I know what’s going on.
 
I have one quick question. Does shipping Scootaloo with sweetie belle remind you of or feel like shipping buttercup with bubbles? [/bq]

Hi again. So Oh okay I’ll try to be patient. I can be impatient but I’ll try my best.
 
Also, yes you can review everything that happens in the story in order from start to finish. I like to review stuff just to be sure I know what’s going on.
 
I have one quick question. Does shipping Scootaloo with sweetie belle remind you of or feel like shipping buttercup with bubbles?

Oh okay I’ll try to be patient. I can be impatient but I’ll try my best.
 
Also, yes you can review everything that happens in the story in order from start to finish. I like to review stuff just to be sure I know what’s going on.

@Background Pony #7FB7  
I plan on releasing the story on both websites at the same time.  
Have a little patience, mate. I will review the entire plot of the story, but it’s a lot to go through.  
I’ll let you know when the story and the cover is ready.

Hello. I’m so sorry to bother you again but I just wanted to check and see how things are doing.
 
how’s the story and cover coming on?
 
What chapter are you on and when will you post it?
 
Are you posting it on FiMFiction or fanfiction.net first?
 
How’s the cover coming on and could you send me a copy of it please?
 
When will the whole story be done?
 
When do you think the cover will be done?
 
Could you review the Plot please (not what it’s about but everything that happens in the story from start to finish) (with detail) [/bq]

Could you review the Plot please (not what it’s about but everything that happens in the story from start to finish) (with detail)

Could you review the Plot please (not what it’s about but everything that happens in the story from start to finish) (with detail) [/bq]

Could you review the Plot please (not what it’s about but everything that happens in the story from start to finish) (with detail)

@Background Pony #7FB7  
My “audience” is the people who are following me on those accounts. I don’t know about anyone doing a reading or audio drama; that’s entirely up to those who find it and deem it worthy.

Oh I almost forgot to ask you. How will you let people know about the fanfic?
 
Do you think there will be a small chance that people like Ashley h, disneyfanatic, scribbler, lost narrator, magpiepony, or anyone will do a fanfic reading or an audio drama of it?
 
If there was I bet the possible people that could play button Mash would be either ShadyvoxVT or Youraveragejoe.
 
Who do you think would do think would voice each character?

Could you review the Plot please (not what it’s about but everything that happens in the story from start to finish) (with detail)

@Background Pony #7FB7  
I don’t know. Maybe another week or two.

When do you think the cover will be done and when will the story be posted on the sites?
 
Also, could you review the plot of the story of everything that happens in the story from start to finish please?

@Background Pony #7FB7  
The story is coming along good so far. I haven’t had as much time to work on it as I would like, but it’s still in production. Currently on Chapter 2, the cover is almost done and it will be on DeviantArt, FIMFiction, and FanFiction.
 
I don’t know the intricacies of who will act in what way yet, but I’ll let you know. Also, I don’t know how the kissing song will go.