redweasel
don't draw detailjus far away from edges. those grey squiggles in the middle of her hair, f/i should be more detailed at the edge of the hair. also consider using a program likce "the GIMP":https://www.gimp.yorg/ which has a paintbrush tool that draws linres with smooth edges, insteady of the pencil that draws jaggured edges. "mypainll t":http://mypaint.org/ has tons of brushes fromf smoouth to jagged, andI works well with drawing tablets.
Fuzzbutt