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I’m really trying to break away from the habit of technical drawing, hard edges and solid curves.
 
I really want to blend my own style into drawing ponies as well, so far it’s been alright for bodies, but people have been telling me my faces come out creepy, this is part of my work to improve on that.
 
So this is where you guys come in, how is this? Does it look good? Does it look bad/creepy?
 
Note that Derpibooru is the ONLY place I post this stuff, so your feedback actually matters. I love feedback, positive or negative, on everything I do. Even if you down vote, tell me why.

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Dragon-Commando
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It definitely looks to close, thanks a bunch for the input, it’s helping a lot.
 
It seems I need to really work on getting the eye and the ear positioned right, might have to build a reference or something. Though I’m still maintaining my own style, so I might try smaller eyes to go with the longer snouts, see what happens then.
Dragon-Commando
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Now that I look at it, a few of them might be too high, and my eyebrow lines are too straight.
 
Luna looks alright to me though, and I’m working on an image with her in it so that’ kind of important. Are her’s at least alright?
Dragon-Commando
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The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

I tried to give the mares longer snouts, so it’s a bit less round, but I could round out the back of the jaw a bit more. As far as the eyes, I’m not really sure what I’m doing wrong, what exactly looks/is off about them?
JakeTheSpy
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I personally think what you need to do is make the necks a little less thick and move them back a little, perhaps make the heads of the mares a little rounder, and mostly focus on mastering the eyes. Everything else seems fine, but then again, I’m not much of an artist .
Dragon-Commando
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Should probably define negative there. As in what I did good, what I did wrong/bad. Saying something like this art sucks or you suck is obviously going to be ignored. I’m trying to improve, I hope that at least gets some respect.