Super cute Lyra!

@Manual_Monaro  
I don’t mind at all! This is just what I need, feedback from people who know what they are talking about because I am really new to this, thank you muchh I will take your advice and see how I like it with my next piece of work!

She looks gorgeous! I really, really love the way you did her mane. It works very well.
 
I hope you don’t mind me saying, but there are a couple of things I wanted to point out, though they’re just my opinion of course. First, I can sort of see what you were trying to do with colouring the line art with a gradient fill, but to me the contrast between the lines and the body fill appears inconsistent or too close to the body fill in certain parts (e.g. at the tip of the left ear there). In my opinion, it’d work a bit better if you kept the line art to one solid, darker shade of colour.
 
The only other thing was maybe the eye could be a bit larger. I’d say stretch the eye more vertically (make it ‘taller’) and try to make the bottom of the eye line up with where the nostrils are or would be. Again, just my personal thoughts.
 
Otherwise, I still love it. Keep it up! <3
 
_{And yes, Lyra is adorable. :3}

This is very lovely and yes Lyra is adorable. Nice work!