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One of my favorite parts of the novel <3

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WillDaBeard
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@WillDaBeard
The picture is pretty nice. I do have some mild issues with that shotgun though. Unless it’s supposed to be a hand shotgun, which is a model in some places, then it is WAY too short to be a sawed off. The trigger is also in a weird place.
Aside from that, the rest of the pic is nice.
The vague background is good, helping bring full focus to the foreground. I think you based this pic off the scene in the Old Appleloosa, just before Pip goes to fuck up all the slavers in the town and rescue the captive foals and fillies. The various injuries to her face are decent, but I’m surprised you didn’t add any injuries to her legs. Even if she had been given a healing potion or two after being taken to New Appleloosa.
If I’m wrong about the scene, then oops… nonetheless, I get the vibe and intensity of the scene. Well done.
 
I used an actual 3D model from the Ashes of Equestria game and traced over it in order to make that sawed off shotgun, so it’s about as accurate I was willing to make it, but fair enough! Thank you very much, I probably should’ve added more battle damage but I just wanted to get it finished at that point, lol. And yes, that’s the exact scene I based it on, used the same dialogue as well and even added the ending message on the log she just finished reading.
 
Appreciate the in depth critique… though I just realized I forgot to add a magic effect to the gun and horn… oops.
OctiLuna

@WillDaBeard  
The picture is pretty nice. I do have some mild issues with that shotgun though. Unless it’s supposed to be a hand shotgun, which is a model in some places, then it is WAY too short to be a sawed off. The trigger is also in a weird place.  
Aside from that, the rest of the pic is nice.  
The vague background is good, helping bring full focus to the foreground. I think you based this pic off the scene in the Old Appleloosa, just before Pip goes to fuck up all the slavers in the town and rescue the captive foals and fillies. The various injuries to her face are decent, but I’m surprised you didn’t add any injuries to her legs. Even if she had been given a healing potion or two after being taken to New Appleloosa.  
If I’m wrong about the scene, then oops… nonetheless, I get the vibe and intensity of the scene. Well done.
OctiLuna

@Background Pony #038B  
In the context of that world, no one was truly good. Everyone killed, or caused somepony to be killed so they weren’t killed themselves.  
Little Pip and her companions, Calamity, Velvet, Steel Hooves and the zebra whose name I cannot recall how to spell correctly… anyways, they were the products of a very sick and fucked up world. So all the killing they did, was mostly in the name of putting things right.  
Did Little Pip kill some innocents? Possibly. Mostly she killed slavers and very demented evil ponies. A few times she indirectly caused the death of some innocents, but she mostly stuck to killing the monsters that wanted to make things worse.  
In the madness of the Equestrian Wasteland, Little Pip did what she felt was right. Doesn’t make it right, or proper or okay. But in the end, she saved a lot of ponies from the wasteland and aided them in starting a path towards a better future.
Background Pony #A4E3
Kill some evil ponies? You know what they say, if you want to change the world, start with yourself!