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Description
The first page of Party of One my first comic I hope you enjoy
Special thanks to KopaLeo for helping me with the correct and translation of the pages
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Special thanks to KopaLeo for helping me with the correct and translation of the pages
Cover >>1638029
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Page 2 >>1638380 (merged)
Edited
Espero que no o Lix tendrá que hacer de nuevo el trabajo
Osea que ya no tiene los horrores ortograficos de antes?
Actually, I think so too, the wording is a bit off.
Rather than “He is the only one who succeeded. She confesses” i’d go for a “He’s the only one who has managed to take a confession from her.”
Another one: “Finally, time to take a little break.” would be more faithful to the original spanish meaning.
The Dr Brave’s speech is also quite wrong. “Well, Cadance. According to your records, you haven’t answer to any of our treatments, started many fights with the auxiliaries and even more so, managed to get isolated from the other patients since you came here.”
I hope it helps.
What do you mean, is there more errors or the translation is kinda flat??