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The middle part, the VERY middle part, was enjoyable, but unfortunately that’s the only part that is, and the rest laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaags like crazy.
Real shame/waste of potential, I think most of the love for it is just that there’s not a lot of fics where NMM comes back as her own mare, she’s always still ‘evil luna’ even if Luna isn’t even a part of her anymore. Only seen two other fics where she gets her own personality, Temptress where she’s kinda like a christian devil analogue and trying to take over Twilight’s body, and Nightmare Woon which is Molly’s recent entry.
The ratings in EqD arn’t that helpful as you can’t change your votes back.
As a story’s quality can change over time a reader it isn’t hard to see people turn on a 6-star as it stop being good
Quantity does not equal quality, and Past Sins was not quality.
So sit down, read a half-way decent author’s work, and learn the fuck up.
BOOKS, MOTHERFUCKER. DO YOU READ THEM?
I liked past sins but felt it squandered it’s potential.
Not Pen Stroke’s best piece of work(Better Living Through Science and Ponies) but decent.
I do hope he uses this story as a learning experience.
Yeah, little things at right times would make all the drama not happen, but then what’s the point of having a story? A cop behind a corner at a right time would make Batman not happen.
Also, Nyx is an literal emotional infant and that’s a major plot point.
It reminds me of all the nonsense argumentation that Celestia and Twilight were breaking character. Celestia doesn’t
havea canon personality, while Twilight is facing problems of maternity at age 20 or something — prime character development territory. Yeah, Nyx acted stupid. She’s two months old.Also, while I would usually avoid argumentation ad hominem, Kkat, the author of massively popular Fallout:Equestria, praised and personally recommended the story. Nothing personal, but I consider opinion of an actual author more valuable than of a random anonymous user.
Some simple sentences and less hiding Nyx from who she is would have made all drama not happen. Twilight should have told Nyx that she isn’t Nightmare Moon from the begin with. She is Nyx. Kind Nyx.
She could have kicked Nexus to the moon as she was empowered over him, but decided to cry instead. She waited, until Twilight nearly DIED before she finally kicked in and got some brains.
I simply see this as the Twilight saga of MLP. Many love the Twilight saga with it’s sparkly vampires. It has movies to it.
Is it a good story? No. But people still squeal over the shit.
Bad stories don’t live on. Saw any fanart of “spiderses” lately? Past Sins is great and most people who read it liked it, it’s rating on EqD is proof of that; it’s worth your time.
Let us never speak of this again.
SHAME ON ME