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Comic Contest Second-Place Entry, by @MattX16
 
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Background Pony #369C
Bonnie: :sniff: i never asked to be this way! :runs down the hall crying:
ShimmeringStallion

@BrownieComicWriter  
Oh, I could indeed get more petty, but now you’re just baiting me.
 
I started off responding to your comment about an eyeba-hang on.
 
 
@Background Pony #B698  
We’re simmering down, relax.
 
 
@BrownieComicWriter  
Blackjack using it is the punchline, but Chica reacting to it is illogical, rendering the punchline moot to begin with.
 
If you simply said “Can we just drop it” and ended it there, I’d be fine with it. The reason I told you to “Chill, man”, is because you then made, in the same comment, a paragraph of variously italicized and bolded text that looked less like you were trying to establish a point, and more like a rage-fit.
 
But fine; discussion dropped. Just know when to stop; it’s right about when you said to.
Background Pony #7F20
How long is it gonna be until the admins bring this heated debate to a halt?
GreenLinzerd
An Artist Who Rocks - 100+ images under their artist tag
Artist -

Bung a rock at it!
Can we just drop it? This started from me being confused as to why on Earth anyone would give Golden Freddy a single human eye when the second thing you’ll notice about him is that he has no eyes. So how is everybody now arguing over whether Chica recognising a gun counts as an error??? That’s just stupid! Those two things are completely different!
 
Blackjack using the gun as a deterrent is THE PUNCHLINE TO THE WHOLE COMIC. Golden Freddy’s eye, on the other hand, is quite irrelevant to the joke, and is in fact A GLARING ERROR WHICH BLATANTLY GOES AGAINST A FUNDAMENTAL FACT, i.e. that Golden Freddy obviously has no eyes!! You see how wildly different those two scenarios are?!
ShimmeringStallion

And how is Chica having a gun pointed at her an error when the pony pointing the gun is Blackjack???
 
How can Chica register the gun as a threat? It doesn’t have the capability to do that… So yeah; error.
 
As for the error involving the screen, you need to actually look at a pull-up screen in order for Bonnie, Chica, and Golden Freddy’s “jumpscares” to make sense, because they’re the ones who take that moment to appear behind it. For all we know, it could be another type of screen, like the podium-screen Markiplier Animated shows off.
GreenLinzerd
An Artist Who Rocks - 100+ images under their artist tag
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Bung a rock at it!
@ShimmeringStallion  
Okay, those two things you mentioned are not errors. First of all, flat touchscreens did not exist in 1993-ish, as far as I know, even though it looks like that’s what you’re using in-game, so it’s open to interpretation what screen you’re actually looking at. Besides, it’s not like you’re looking at the cameras the whole time anyway!
 
And how is Chica having a gun pointed at her an error when the pony pointing the gun is Blackjack???
ShimmeringStallion

@BrownieComicWriter  
Didn’t bother mentioning Bonnie on the right instead of the left?
 
Truth be told, there’s plenty of errors (the lack of anyone having the monitoring-screen, Chica being aimed at with a regular gun, etc.). It shouldn’t be looked at for its quality, but its concept.
GreenLinzerd
An Artist Who Rocks - 100+ images under their artist tag
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Bung a rock at it!
@Project Z  
It’s completely different. One can instantly see when looking at Golden Freddy that he doesn’t seem to have eyes at all, whereas it’s not instantly obvious when looking at Chica’s design that she only comes to the right door.
Background Pony #7F20
@ShimmeringStallion  
I liked that it tricked us, thinking that the second game is a sequel when you see the words ‘Grand Reopening’ until you see the check at the end of Night 5-6
 
@BrownieComicWriter  
I don’t think he’s gonna answer. You could try sending him a private message.
ShimmeringStallion

@Baskerville3  
It was a “grand reopening” because there was an original “first” and “second” location. FNAF actually occurs at a fourth and final location, but the second game occurs in the THIRD location.
 
Also, original name was something called “FredBear’s Family Diner”.