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“I’m Twilight Sparkle. Princess of Friendship. And here my kingdom. Role model kingdom of friendship.”
 
Shipping and Descendant Warning :  
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)  
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)  
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)  
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
 
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
 
Warning : This story’s an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn’t exist.
 
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with “To Love God - To Love Mortal” but in the future and more crazy. You don’t need to read “To Love God - To Love Mortal” to understand this story. It’s just have many Easter egg for that story here.

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Background Pony #3501
@Background Pony #1E2B  
Hey, I see your point, but I’m curious. Could it be that No one shunned Rarity and Spike, but they shunned themselves? Like they personally thought that they were to much of a danger to live in society so they lived in exile of their own free will? Reading the beginning of this comic that seems to be what happened.
Jumpitydude
Not a Llama - Happy April Fools Day!
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Mods see you
@Background Pony #2B97  
Through my highly aggressive family and some prior issues with others on the internet, I’ve learned to keep a level head and avoid jumping to conclusions. It’s mostly that last line of your first post that told me not to treat you roughly. It’s just an opinion after all.
Background Pony #8370
@gorkspewdium
 
If I may give some constructive criticism on the author…:
 
What has been established by stuff approved by DHX is that
 
1)Spike is one of the only domesticated dragons. They are raised to be aggresive and under migration until they are adults, where it seems they either continue to migrate with a family of their own, or find a cave where they can horde treasure. Without Spike’s help, a small but potentially extremely powerful dragon, they would not be able to establish a communication with ponies. Dragons in general do not respect anything lesser beings.  
2) Diamond dogs do have a sense of culture and morality compared to wild Diamond dogs, but the problem is they are still genetically too dumb and too amoral to live among pony society of laws and rights. They live for their gems. For Tolkein references, think far worse then Dwarves, but better then Goblins. Integration might be possible, but not without its daily troubles.  
3) Griffons and Zebra’s in general do not have excellent cultural relations with Equestria, if the info is correct on that from the rushed Journal Book. Celestia keeps a territorial peace between the two. That’s why they are so few in Equestria. (Honestly I always assumed the Zebra’s land was just really far away from central Equestria) Twilight was never much of a diplomat for less then peaceful situations, that was more RD’s area of expertise.
 

 
Considering Twilight is the least wise and worldly of the 6, it is highly unlikely that she was able to pull this off after her friends “deaths” and exile, since this is established to be completely new to Rarity. Then again, this timeline was written right after Twilight’s Kingdom, before Rainbow Rocks when Twilight realized with Sunset’s help that both how she became a princess and the title of Princess of Friendship didn’t mean anything. She realized that she is only strong with her friends as a whole, and that refusing to rely on her friends is betraying their trust and their safety.
 
While I love the creativity, one thing I’ve noticed is that this writer has kept Twilight pretty broken, which is why this page in particular is giving a rather sour note. She comes out of the blue after decades and tells them they can reconnect with society which they couldn’t before until know, Nightmare or not? For an element of Harmony and town hero? For a town that tolerated Discord? Pull the other one.
 
The craziest thing about ‘crazy future’ is that they took the concept of Twilight’s ‘Kingdom’ seriously. I know the writer needed a reason to make it so Nightmare Rarity never saw her aged little sister(that creates way too much immortality drama then just talking about friends that have passed), and a reason to be introduced to the new potential elements of harmony, but they gave no solid reasoning of why she is only allowed back now. Princess Twilight Sparkle swears that they are allowed now, but what does that even mean? Was Nightmare Rarity’s existence a big issue or not? Seeing as how Super Surprise fixed what little curse Rarity’s body still has on the moon in a heartbeat, and Spike would of mentioned if Rarity was prone to more serious demonic outbursts since her resurrection, it doesn’t seem to be very well justified. I’m still giving it the benefit of the doubt since its just started, but my point still stands about Rarity presenting a danger to anyone.
Irony
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Stop Right There!
Or to put it another way: It’s ponyville, you are only the third weirdest thing to show up this week.
Background Pony #AE02
So.. the griffon is Optimus Prime ,and the pony is megatron, so the pony is unhappy to see the griffon :P
Aeden

@Background Pony Number 17
 
More that “segregation” I think “Conservative”. Ponies are Order’s creature, so anything that could disturbed the “status quo” is unpopular.
 
They don’t love the unknown or the change. So everypony was afraid of Zecora, or hated Discord.
gorkspewdium

@Background Pony #0A37  
@thps48  
Checked DA, and the statue’s for NMM. Same continuity as that other vava-comic where she gets a tangible form independent of Luna.
 
@PonyPon  
Yeah, dunno if I’d take the word of three provincial schoolfillies as a spot-on assessment of their nation’s integration progress. Closest thing to a type-exclusive region’s likely Cloudsdale, simply ’cause few non-peggies care to muck around with walking on air vapor.
 
And since pone/griffon relations are at least hinted to be amiable ’tween Gilda & Gustave, why not open the door for D-dogs & manageable-sized dragons? Especially with so much crazy local talent to shut down aggressive types?
Background Pony #95C9
@Jumpitydude  
Momentarily off my desktop, so not logged in. But yes, this illustrated for me why the concept of twi as a “princess” never worked nor can. So it was pertinent to say. Though I quite like the artist and this comic. Truly unfortunate he finds my opinion thus so horrible he HATES me for it.
 
Thanks. Really. I only faved everything you post that I saw, vuvu. Makes me warm and fuzzy. Anyway, that is my peace. I am only sad such hate is made only by a dislike of literary device and trope incompatibility. In spite of vocally loving the comic itself. At least I thank you for being reasonable.
Background Pony #3C99
Interesting. We assume that’s a Princess Luna statue, but with the name blocked and the wild shipping in this story, we probably shouldn’t do that.
Background Pony Number 17
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition

@eden89  
It actually follows logically from show canon. In “Flight to the Finish”, the CMCs pointed out that what made Ponyville special was that Unicorns, Pegasi and Earth Ponies all lived there together. (That, btw, implied that racial segregation was still the norm in Equestria.)
 
Princess Twilight apparently took it upon herself to extend that tolerance beyond just toward different races of ponies to all intelligent species in Equestria.
Aeden

I like this :)
 
I found Equestria a little “xenophobic”, the idea of a kingdom with a lot of species it’s very neat and fun.
Dirty Bit
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Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice

That's him, officer
@JP
 
Just because a place turns out to be the most tolerant living settlement doesn’t mean there aren’t any small traces of opposition…
JP
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I miss the show so much
That pony in the lower left corner doesn’t seem to be very happy about that griffon.
Dirty Bit
Thread Starter - Hazbin Hotel Thread [Possible NSFW/Dark]
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice

That's him, officer
It really is nice to see Ponyville thrive like this in the future.
 
A pity the other elements aren’t around to see it…