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Good plot, but could have been better.

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ElusiveDelight

The Clopper
The plot was… alright, but there was plenty of room left to exspand things. After all, there are people whos job it is to do things just like that.
 
It would not have been hard to take a firm grasp of the plot and work it until you had something worth looking at, all that really in insert some extra content, give the plot more depth and exspand upon the points of intrest.
Mayojar77
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

@greaterlimits  
Twilight wouldn’t have been at the Princess’ Summit if she wasn’t a Princess, and Sunset wouldn’t have felt the need to attempt to achieve what in all honesty seems like an impossible goal.
Mayojar77
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Please, the plot was barely there and could have been prevented in it’s entirety if Celestia hadn’t decided that she absolutely must turn at least one of her students into a princess.
Background Pony #3850
NO! No, Plot means pony ass! not their human horse counterparts breasts! You sick little pervert!