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After the disappearance of Fluttershy and her animals running semi-wild around the town Twilight and her friends have to round them up unable to focus to find their missing friend. Feeling bad about it and hoping she was okay the members of the Cutie Mark Crusaders; Apple Bloom, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle go out and look for her. After reading several books about young snoops and sleuths such as Mystery Clue and the Secrets of Manehatten, Adventures of the Mystery Doo and the Mystery Gang and a few things online called “DiD Fan Fiction” The girl believed they were ready to be the Cutie Mark Crusaders Mystery Solvers in hopes to get a cutie mark in mystery solving. Their first clue was a blonde lock of somepony’s mane on Fluttershy’s rug, second was a purple bracelet they found a few feet from her door and the 3rd and final clue was this odd green mare with a blonde mane they never seen around Ponyville acting very strange always saying someone or somebody instead of somepony something that the Living Dictionary Sweetie Belle noticed.
They followed her in hopes she knew something but lost her in an old abandon house just on the outskirts of the town. The girls sneak in looking around but it was already getting late, Sweetie Belle was getting nervous. Scootaloo then started to act all macho in hopes to snap Sweetie Belle out of it while Apple Bloom found their best clue yet, a pink lock of mane was found and they were sure it was Fluttershy’s meaning she’s somewhere in this strangely large house!
Just then Sweetie Belle began to muffle loudly causing the girls to look behind them only to see that Green Mare grabbing Sweetie Belle and… Licking her Horn! An act that should never be preformed, at least not to a minor, the girls freak and start to run in hopes to get help but then are snatched by what appears to be living rope only to realize that the Mare was using magic to control it binding them tightly unable to run away! Then some dirty rags few by covering their muzzles silencing their cries for help as the rope pulls and tugs on them pulling their hooves behind their backs. Sweetie Belle watches in shock to see her friends subdued scared that she herself is helpless to do anything as this Mare continues her uninvited advances making her feel strange an confused, feelings she shouldn’t be feeling yet.
The mare just smiles, happy with her latest catch and already in the mists of another plan to ensnare her next victims! But the question is… Who will it be this time?
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so tell me what you think… about the pic and my quick story :p
They followed her in hopes she knew something but lost her in an old abandon house just on the outskirts of the town. The girls sneak in looking around but it was already getting late, Sweetie Belle was getting nervous. Scootaloo then started to act all macho in hopes to snap Sweetie Belle out of it while Apple Bloom found their best clue yet, a pink lock of mane was found and they were sure it was Fluttershy’s meaning she’s somewhere in this strangely large house!
Just then Sweetie Belle began to muffle loudly causing the girls to look behind them only to see that Green Mare grabbing Sweetie Belle and… Licking her Horn! An act that should never be preformed, at least not to a minor, the girls freak and start to run in hopes to get help but then are snatched by what appears to be living rope only to realize that the Mare was using magic to control it binding them tightly unable to run away! Then some dirty rags few by covering their muzzles silencing their cries for help as the rope pulls and tugs on them pulling their hooves behind their backs. Sweetie Belle watches in shock to see her friends subdued scared that she herself is helpless to do anything as this Mare continues her uninvited advances making her feel strange an confused, feelings she shouldn’t be feeling yet.
The mare just smiles, happy with her latest catch and already in the mists of another plan to ensnare her next victims! But the question is… Who will it be this time?
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so tell me what you think… about the pic and my quick story :p
It’s okay, I’m bi, we can share her. :D
If anything, we ran away from a guy with a SIG P226.
So yeah, there’s that.
grabs Janice and points to thps48’s face while giving unamused look
You’d like to prove that, wouldn’t you. Because I really don’t have time for shit like this. I got a lot of other cases that I can’t ignore. I mean seriously, I fought and killed 16 Pinkie Pies who want my blood on their hands. Deserter should know, because he helped me, right Deserter?
You know, for once? I think I like where this is going.
So, you want to get molested? We can get ryusei to arrange that. >:D
Hey man, it’s cool. I’m a detective and I’ve fought hoards of outrageous enemies (remember the Pinkie Pies) that were stronger than me and I’ve kicked their asses. So I’m pretty sure I can handle her.
Let me put it this way:
You could give a dude Power Armor, a fully automatic shotgun loaded with Dragon Breaths (even though it wouldn’t be able to cycle to due to Dragon’s Breath being underpowered but bear with me here), Navy SEAL level military training and somehow Knot will manage to kick his ass.
Don’t ask me how, but it’s gonna happen.
Relax, the G.U.N. Commander is immortal, can cut throught her ropes with my claw, in pony is an alicorn and can counter her magic as an alicorn. Besides, she only goes after mares, I think.
Good fucking luck with that. You’re gonna need it.
I haven’t really seen a whole lot of your art until now, but it is very good artwork, even when I get over-the-top about implied rape and jump to conclusions too early. Here, have a muffin. :)
!fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/296/1/c/muffin_by_ikillyou121-d4donrs.png!
puts on sunglasses, insert COPS theme here
But I, the G.U.N. Commander is still determined to take Love Knot to jail!
Sorry, if I offended you. It just kinda looks like it that way. And if Fluttershy died at the hospital, it would likely be shock, caused by the trauma of what she had to endure under your oc.
When something starts with “This is the private log if (sic) the G.U.N. Commander, real name unknown”, I think that there’s no communicating with it.
murder? beating? what? you obviously have never seen my work. beatings aren’t my thing nor murder.
This is the private log if the G.U.N. Commander, real name unknown, September 25, 2013. I arrived too late. The CMC looked like took a hell of a beating… and a raping. The bitch who orchestrated all of this, Love Knot, is the same one behind the rape and murder of Fluttershy, considering she died at the hospital this morning. Unfortunately, Love Knot escape before I came here. After rushing paramedics here to take the CMC to the hospital, something glimmered in my eye. After close examination, it was revealed to be a list of all the potential victims she’s planning on harming next. The next pony on this list is Sweetie Belle’s sister, Rarity. If I’m going to save her, I better hurry. As I get back into my 1969 Dodge Charger and speed off to the Carousel Boutique, I think about how am I going to apprehend this pedophilliac freak with a penchant for violence and rape and see if justice will be served. I just hope I’m not to late.
End transmission.
I’m not sure if I take that as a compliment, but you’re welcome, i guess?
actually I thank you, since i wasn’t sure who I was gonna draw next _
My fault.
actually it’s been decided that a certain Diva will be next
The other guy is the disturbed one. I was just supporting his idea as a registered member of IB… Registered, lol.
Okay, no, this is too fucked up for me, I’m out.