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>>1673885
>>1673887
They are tagged “grotesque”. i guess that’s why you can’t see them.
Yeah comic’s a nice effort but I can’t say I disagree…
You might argue that they wanted to keep the fic as short and simple and possible, except those extra scenes aren’t just unneccessary length, it’s the plot holes that make them neccessary. You can leave scenes out if imagination can easily fill them but not if they raise questions the reader has to come up with inventive excuses for.
why would t hey murder ponies? their foodsource? not to mention WHY THE MOTHA FUCK WOULD THEY MURDER THE FAMILY? the family dying would just create a giant exclamation point on theri heads man.
it really negatively impacts the potential drama of it all in the process. too busy understanding the illogical motivations to be affected by what occurs.
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