@Yari
To me, it fees like dream-like as you would have in a dream and more afterdream-like as you try to remember a dream by playing it back in circuitous fragments.
Maybe. My problem is the dialogue isn’t flowing and it’s as disjointed as a nightmare. Maybe that’s the idea, but it’s about as enjoyable as a nightmare because of it.
@trapped-in-a-jar
What I’m getting out of this is that they’re in a horror movie and Luna is the smart one no one listens too until it’s too late, and Celestia is the stupid stubborn one who thinks she’s always right…up until she becomes victim 1.
Having read the whole thing, I can only say I am having one hell of a horrible time trying to understand the dialogue. It’s like a continuous line of interruptions for 37 panels with nothing actually being exposited.
To me, it fees like dream-like as you would have in a dream and more afterdream-like as you try to remember a dream by playing it back in circuitous fragments.
Maybe. My problem is the dialogue isn’t flowing and it’s as disjointed as a nightmare. Maybe that’s the idea, but it’s about as enjoyable as a nightmare because of it.
What I’m getting out of this is that they’re in a horror movie and Luna is the smart one no one listens too until it’s too late, and Celestia is the stupid stubborn one who thinks she’s always right…up until she becomes victim 1.
Or that is how it is reading for me, so far.